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Felox08 [2012-02-04 22:59:59 +0000 UTC]

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Im not used on doing critiques , but if you allow me, i would like to share my thoughts about this pic.

-Positive:

a)The angle/perpective. It gives the character a little more dinamic while she try to tease you by pulling down her panties. A good perspective can raise double your work and i think this one could be the case.

b) Your color technique is really impresive. Somehow its seems very simple but im sure that is not simple for you to color like this. Little advice: try to blend some of the lights and shadows according to the enviorment instead of using only the standar -sking tone that you usually use.



-Negative:

a) the expresion. She is somehow in like a "neutral or serious mode" for what the pic really wants to show " Teasing, sexy- concept". I think you should work more on your facial expresion in order to match the concept of what you are trying to show.


Final thoughts:

Indeed its a very good-quality pic but it lacks on emotion or feelings. Try to work more on those concepts on your next work, i wil asure you the results will be even better -


PD. i hope you dont take personally this critiques, im trying to help

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DarthFugue [2013-01-23 23:34:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm not getting the complete picture — literally!
(I get everything, from just below her breasts — and up!)

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DarthFugue [2013-01-23 23:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Could you make a "petrified" version of her — AS-IS?

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Rizhnir [2012-02-14 20:42:00 +0000 UTC]

I like the body shaping you used. For whatever reason I can never seem to pull it off. Very impressive!

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Madpredator [2012-02-13 02:40:54 +0000 UTC]

Yeah!! no hair!

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teyuu [2012-02-10 22:16:20 +0000 UTC]

Damn yeah dude, awesome job here. However i share Felox08 opinion, she would be perfect (or nearly) with a teasing expression ^w^

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knytcrawlr [2012-02-10 06:12:10 +0000 UTC]

wow dude, really great colour work on this piece!

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Agu-Fungus [2012-02-08 20:51:20 +0000 UTC]

Ya era hora que hicieras esto!

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sigel4ever [2012-02-07 00:17:11 +0000 UTC]

so good

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JhonL22 [2012-02-06 23:02:25 +0000 UTC]

que preciosura hiciste man! una de las mejores que hiciste a mi parecer.

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Heli-Starr2 [2012-02-05 19:28:08 +0000 UTC]

Sexy.

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DeadCobra [2012-02-05 11:52:01 +0000 UTC]

Fuck this is hot

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RedWingsDragon [2012-02-05 06:07:23 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work here

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mbishop2050 [2012-02-05 01:08:39 +0000 UTC]

Looks fantastic.

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VaryagOfMiklagaard [2012-02-04 23:40:24 +0000 UTC]

As ever very sexy lady drawn very well.
Top isint short nuff!
Other then that its wery pwetty.

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Saduharta [2012-02-04 20:46:17 +0000 UTC]

...critique? Not sure this needs it, heh. That well done. If there is one it would be that I think the right fold where her leg meets her waist goes a bit high I think. But that's a matter of perspective and it doesn't really detract from how awesome it is.

So tempting to say perfect. Purr =^_^=

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barmoe [2012-02-04 18:42:07 +0000 UTC]

Como siempre, el color le da vida a tus trabajos ¡¡¡

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J-Century [2012-02-04 18:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Hey Jorge, nice work!

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Levia-the-Dragon [2012-02-04 17:49:28 +0000 UTC]

The panty-pull nd semi-loose top work well here.

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Eve-chan18 [2012-02-04 17:42:54 +0000 UTC]

hola darkshadow tanto tieeeeeeempo ^^ que genial tu pic

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