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Chapter Five – Desperation
Sakura felt it as the clamp finally slackened and dissolved around her arm.
She had to choose, she could make a break for the surface and air, but if her attacker recovered, she'd never make it. The other girl was dazed but already stirring, and through it all, that strange breathing bubble on her lower face remained intact.
No, she had to make sure the other kunoichi was down for the count. But Sakura was unarmed now. All her tools gone, and her chakra and oxygen nearly spent.
Lunging forward, Sakura clamped both hands around the girl's head. Her strong right hand slicing cleanly through the bubble and clamping over the girl's nose and moth, her left grabbing the top of her head putting the stranger girl totally at Sakura's mercy.
Using her head as a pivot point, the leaf Jonin snapped her legs around the other ninja's midsection, clamping her calves up into the woman's diaphragm.
Sakura squeezed.
The woman's eyes flew open at once and she panicked. Bucking and tossing wildly, kicking up a cloud of silt from the seabed just inches below them and still to far away and too unyielding to provide any leverage.
Still Sakura squeezed. Her face red from the strain and her lips clamped tight against the release of air, some still dribbling out here and there as the precious reserve exhausted itself.
An eruption of bubbles escaped the hunter-turned prey. Her eyes wide as dinner plates as she clawed at the water to no avail. She writhed like a serpent and still the weakened and nearly dead leaf Jonin clung on.
Somewhere along the line, this had changed. It was no longer a struggle to subdue, it was something else, something worse. The writhing, the power, the anger... something deep within Sakura sang with it all, something she'd long suppressed called out to finish it, to kill the girl and to watch her eyes as it happened...
With a sickening, wretched lurch, the unknown kunoichi paused in her struggles. Her chest heaved spasmodically, and then she went slowly limp.
The dark voice within Sakura crowed. The rest of her sat, stunned.
The girl was dead.
And Sakura, who had never yet taken a life in anything but open combat, had taken this battle far beyond that.
Woodenly, she tried and failed to unlock her legs from the girl's midsection.
Sakura was a murderer.
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Comments: 20
shadowmanuel [2014-02-25 06:13:53 +0000 UTC]
Owww I love it, please draw more sakura, ino vs scuba babes
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SolidSamurai [2011-03-29 00:53:06 +0000 UTC]
Pink haired girl's groine looks a bit off. Did anyone else already mention this?
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DaStigy In reply to SolidSamurai [2011-03-29 21:07:10 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, the whole hip is a bit odd.
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ArchAngelSx [2010-08-15 16:37:01 +0000 UTC]
sakura's doing better than her foe........... I think she's dead!!!
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SolidSamurai In reply to DaStigy [2011-03-29 00:54:07 +0000 UTC]
If her foe was dead, she'd be bloated and blue.
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SolidSamurai In reply to SolidSamurai [2011-03-29 00:54:19 +0000 UTC]
And not looking as cute as she does right now.
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Kakyo01 [2010-05-14 17:27:29 +0000 UTC]
hmm... personally i think sakura's thought she would be a murderer after drowning her attacker is wrong
with a good defense lawyer she should get away with 'second-degree murder in self-defense'
the now dead ninja attacked her first anyway
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DaStigy In reply to Kakyo01 [2010-05-14 18:06:05 +0000 UTC]
I get the joke. ^_^
But seriously, if you think about it (and I'm not a huge fan of the show so maybe this is wrong) Sakura's never killed bare handed before. That's why I go to thinking this may affect her more than normal.
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Kakyo01 In reply to DaStigy [2010-05-14 20:30:54 +0000 UTC]
i stopped watching the anime years ago... it's not as good as the manga anyway
(too many episodes, that are in no way conntected to the manga-story)
i can't remember if sakura killed someone in the manga at all...
the few times sakura killed someone (at least the ones i remember) happened in the anime-movies...
and as said before i don't count them as canon to the manga-story
i my country we have a different word for 'second-degree murder'... we don't use the term 'murder' at all in it (maybe a way to fool the jury )
(erm.. that did sound weird... )
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davidsherman1342 In reply to DaStigy [2010-05-26 04:23:02 +0000 UTC]
man, i think i made the right vote...if it's not too much to ask, what were endings 1 and 3?
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DaStigy In reply to davidsherman1342 [2010-05-26 16:16:52 +0000 UTC]
Ending one was Tenten's improvised shield didn't work and she blows herself up. Ending 3 was Sakura died and Ino blamed herself for it. So yeah,I wimped out and took the 'everybody lives' route ^_~
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davidsherman1342 In reply to DaStigy [2010-05-27 06:53:10 +0000 UTC]
Meh, at least the story itself can go on, it's a good piece of fan fiction no matter the ending. Thanks for making it!
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DaStigy In reply to davidsherman1342 [2010-05-27 16:15:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for saying so. ^_^
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Animedrago [2010-05-10 19:05:16 +0000 UTC]
So far I like this is going. I do have to questions that I hope you will look into. One: after you are done with this are you gonna take all the story parts and post them all together as one story? I think that would be a good read. Two: are you gonna make a sequal to this?I like the girls you choose for this but I kinda wanted to see Hinata in here, along with Maybe Kurenai and either Anko or Temari, the second was more of an after thought really and I'm more curious about the first question. Keep up the good work either way.
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DaStigy In reply to Animedrago [2010-05-10 19:41:06 +0000 UTC]
Probably and probably.
How's that for a pair of nice firm answers? ^_~
Honestly, there are two more chapters in this first arc (assuming the poll in the journal post ever yields a clear winner) and then there will mot likely be a second arc, dealing with the issues raised here.
Where it goes form there is an interesting question. While Id really appreciate folks letting me sew up this part of the story, I'm seriously considering opening the second or third arc up if anyone else would like to try their hand. ^_^ I love collaborative story ventures.
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DaStigy [2010-05-10 17:16:44 +0000 UTC]
This story has taken a really dark turn. I'm not a big fan of such scenes. I admit I enjoy 'walk the plank' stories, but not if it doesn't turn out all right for the one taking the stroll.
So, why did this happen? Cause it's going to be fun to play with the emotional baggage later. ^_~
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