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Published: 2015-06-01 06:03:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 2085; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 3
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Paw practiceeeeeeeAs someone pointed out, and as I've noticed myself, my paws are... Okay, basically, stumps. Not exactly pleasing to the eye. So Im going to try more realistic paws, at least for now, because they look better. And so practice happened, because obviously I need to make that look good before I actually use it. Still don't know if it looks good though, what do you all think? This is only like 15 minutes of practice so idk
Top middle is bad I know, paw's too small and generally in the wrong position, so is the middle middle, the paw isn't long enough and it's too far back uhh
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Dawnpath In reply to ??? [2015-07-27 03:46:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! All the advice was SUPER helpful and I'll have to keep it all in mind from now on!
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Wandering-Wolf666 In reply to Dawnpath [2015-07-27 03:48:42 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome ^^Β
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Leafeon-Drawz [2015-06-01 06:18:15 +0000 UTC]
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First of all I want to say yea your paws are stumps but mine are two but it was a great bloody idea to try to draw realistic paws. How you angle your paws are quite idealistic and great and the way your drawing them is good. The tuft on the elbow or joint works to an extent and the paw itself is very super realistic. The claws are a nice touch and they work as they aren't so super big and all that jazz. I just relished this is my first critic wow I'm such a nooby noob face of all...
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Shartruse In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-02 00:32:34 +0000 UTC]
no problem, its really good
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Dawnpath In reply to Shartruse [2015-06-02 00:48:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh thank you X'3
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Dawnpath In reply to Anonymous-Owl [2015-06-01 22:10:05 +0000 UTC]
Waaaaaait baaaab
No do the art steaaaal XD
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Anonymous-Owl In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-01 22:11:44 +0000 UTC]
I meant as a reference e-e
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Dawnpath In reply to Anonymous-Owl [2015-06-01 22:27:28 +0000 UTC]
OOOOH XD
Sorry, I'm tired XD
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Dawnpath In reply to FireflyElixer [2015-06-01 16:17:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! 8D
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blinxnot [2015-06-01 07:24:34 +0000 UTC]
Hehehe it's so cool
better than my damn paws omg
such stumps
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-01 07:48:50 +0000 UTC]
Heheh thank you babe <3
I tried! It's not great, but idk, they happened at 1am and I'm tired XD
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blinxnot In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-01 07:49:42 +0000 UTC]
But they look cool! You've improved so much >3<
You're welcome, baby <3
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-01 07:53:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh thank you I-I
I feel like I kinda failed really hard here though >w<
But thank you ;;
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blinxnot In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-01 08:10:59 +0000 UTC]
You succeeded amazingly, Tess! <3Β
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-01 22:35:38 +0000 UTC]
Baaaaabe <3
Good morning!!
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blinxnot In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-01 22:46:10 +0000 UTC]
Good morning, babe!
How're you? <3 <3
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-02 02:21:24 +0000 UTC]
Uh
Babe? Just have a quick question, if you're up to it
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-02 02:41:44 +0000 UTC]
Uh, actually, nevermind...
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blinxnot In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-02 03:00:21 +0000 UTC]
W-What's wrong, babe? Tell me.... ;-;
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-02 03:02:23 +0000 UTC]
I dunno, just feeling down... Had a good internet friend try to kill herself today...
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blinxnot In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-02 03:04:59 +0000 UTC]
W-What?! What do you mean!?
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-02 03:08:03 +0000 UTC]
I won't disclose any names, but yeah... She tried to slit her wrists late at night, she only didn't die because she cut in the wrong place...
I spent four hours talking to her before she finally got herself some sleep... I'm just terrified she'll never come back, and that she'll just wake up in the morning and try again and succeed and
Sh-she was my support before I met you
And she still is
She's so special and important and
I
I don't knowΒ
Everything's felt so dull and lifeless and... Grey today, I don't know how to describe it...
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blinxnot In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-02 03:09:47 +0000 UTC]
O-Okay.... But I just
I'm sorry.... I-I didn't mean to get information
I can help you paint over that grey with colours....
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-02 03:12:26 +0000 UTC]
Nonono it's fine, I gave it willinglyΒ
Its just been a rough day, between that and not being able to share it with anyone... It's been a bit lonely and... Black and empty, idk...
And it's okay babe, save those colors for your own world.
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blinxnot In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-02 03:14:24 +0000 UTC]
Babe, I have too many colours for myself.... I need to share it, at least with you..Β
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-02 03:20:21 +0000 UTC]
No, it's fine...Β
Share it with people who really need and deserve it... Siblings, irl friends, people like Leaf or someone...Β
I hate taking from others...
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blinxnot In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-02 03:22:03 +0000 UTC]
I don't care, you need it and deserve it... Please, I swear... I got enough, more than enough actually
I'm putting colour in your life, okay? ^^Β
//hugs
Please, babe
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-02 03:33:03 +0000 UTC]
Th-thank you babe, I just don't know...
Whats wrong with me? I thought for a while that I was something
For some reason, I felt that I could ask for things from people, that I could take things when offered and not feel bad, that I could disagree with someone and have an opinion and it'd be okay...
But all of a sudden today I'm back to how I was, feeling and knowing that I can't do those things. It's just not right, not kind, not deserved...
Babe, I'm sorry for taking all that I took from you. Your lack of worry about something, your color, your happiness, everything...
Im just really sorry for everything babe... I wish I had never existed, then you never would have known me in the first place...
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blinxnot In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-02 03:41:52 +0000 UTC]
I don't know hun... But Please.... The only reason I have colour is because of you..
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-02 03:51:04 +0000 UTC]
How the hell, babe.
All I ever bring is blackness and evil and shit
I never bring happiness to anyone
Just shit
Just like my sister just whispered at me five seconds ago
Made sure mom couldn't head
Made sure I could though, made sure she said it over and over again while I begged her to leave
Im just a horrendous personΒ
Im useless
All I want is for others to be happy and I hate to take
But then I just take people and make them my servants and my whipping boys, apparentlyΒ
I'm fucking USELESS.
ALICIA, PLEASE, JUST GET AWAY FROM ME
I DONT WANT TO HURT YOU ANYMORE
I DONT WANT YOU TO BELIEVE THOSE LIES
I DONT WANT YOU TO BELIEVE YOU NEED ME
NO ONE NEEDS ME
EVERYONE JUST NEEDS ME
DEAD
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blinxnot In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-02 03:57:48 +0000 UTC]
I NEED YOU
EVERYONE DOES
TESSA MILLER
PLEASE
I LOVE YOU
DON'T SAY OTHER WISE
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-02 04:00:42 +0000 UTC]
But
A-Alicia
All I do is harm others
There's nothing to love in a big ball of useless blackness
In a big ball of useless, painful blackness
I just want you to escape from me
Please
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blinxnot In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-02 04:03:43 +0000 UTC]
Tessa.... Please
You are why I have colour
You are why I am happy
You are why I love to be alive...
please... I'll never leave
I just..
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-02 04:05:03 +0000 UTC]
But that's the problem!
I HATE being that for someone!! I-I want to make others happy, but I don't want them to rely on me! It's not because I don't want the responsibility, truly, it's just that I'm terrified Im constantly letting them down or I'm going to let them down majorly one day!
I can't be someone's downfall!!
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blinxnot In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-02 04:13:25 +0000 UTC]
You are making everyone happy! You're doing what you want to be!! You aren't someone's downfall ;A;
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-02 04:19:05 +0000 UTC]
I'm always someone's downfall, Alicia! My sisters absolutely HATE me, my mother wishes she had never even created me! My dad doesn't give a fuck, my teachers all probably hate me for never getting my work in, I can always see how I annoy all my irl friends, and I constantly rant/be depressed to/cling to my online friends!
Im a fucking MONSTER
I NEVER DO ANYTHING RIGHT
ALL I DO IS HURT OTHERS
I SOMEHOW MAKE PEOPLE THINK THEY NEED ME AROUND
WHEN ALL THEY NEED IS FOR ME TO GET THE FUCK OUT OF EVERYONE'S LIVES AND JUST GO DIE!!
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blinxnot In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-02 04:26:24 +0000 UTC]
TESSA MARIE MILLER
WE ALL CARE FOR YOU
IF WE DIDN'T WE WOULD LEAVE YOU BEHIND
WE HAVEN'T
BECAUSE WE LOVE YOU
PLEASE
Just see...
//hugs
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-02 04:28:44 +0000 UTC]
But that's my point!
Β
I make people think that they like me and want me as a friend!
They don't want to look at me truly, see what a huge shit I am!
Fucking look at me nowΒ
Instead of shutting the fuck up and just leaving, letting you get over me
I make a huge fucking damn dramatic scene over it
Spill my thoughts that no one really wants to hear, no matter what they say
And make you feel bad or freak out or something
I just need to stop being so selfish and stop making friends...
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blinxnot In reply to Dawnpath [2015-06-02 04:35:32 +0000 UTC]
B-But.... I want to hear
I care
I love you
you know that
I will always listen...
P-Please....
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Dawnpath In reply to blinxnot [2015-06-02 04:40:58 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, want to hear all my thoughts?Β
Right
Im not spilling all my depressed, suicidal crap to you
Youre too important for that
I know it'll just hurt you
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