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daxx0r — ATR Chapter 3 Page 2
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Published: 2014-12-19 22:27:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 568; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Finally, after a massive uni-induced delay, here's the latest page, right in time for christmas!I'm really happy with where the comic is going right now. The last chapter was all very... shallow. All the dialogue, all the actions, they were in the now - they were very reactionary. "Oh he did this! Now I must do that!" "What you just said angers me! I must do this now!" - I felt like the universe I have created in the background didn't really get to play it's part in the story. In this chapter, already, things are different. The officer in this page has a backstory and an established relationship with Cpt. Black, and I finally get to bring that up. The story is getting some... volume to it. Black is no longer a character who, for all intents and purposes, came into existence the first time we see him - he has a life and he has a reputation and he has people who don't like him very much. Woo!
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pfff....dont you call that cool, tactical warfare wolf a 'it'...ioughtapopabitchrighthurr~
lovin the different perspectives throughout the panels, especially the fourth one.
But in that last panel I think you may want to lift the hair line a few inches up from the face, it looks slightly 'smashed in.'
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Ahahahaha, I love how "it" is having sucha big reaction - you're not the only one who's commented on that!
Thanks so much, and yes, you're totally right - That panel was a nightmare for me - just couldn't get it right. I must have redrawn it a dozen times
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