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Published: 2016-06-28 15:10:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1008; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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Description Another coloured picture, vector-traced from my collection of pencil sketches.
It's good to know that whenever Freda is feeling downhearted or uncertain about anything, Cedar is always there for her... or vice versa.
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Comments: 18

AlexRaccoonGlider [2016-07-02 19:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Heya Dan, hows it going? Since you were so kind to turn on/request a critique on this picture. I'll give you an in-depth review of this wonderful picture of the two Wilkinsons.

Vision) Well it's a simple picture of Cedar next to her younger sister: Freda. Although it appears to be that Freda is pretty tall for her age (in her mid twenties, right?) she could almost reach up to Cedar's height. Then again it's a well known fact that most women grow tall and reach a maximum height after 20 years. But it looks like despite how young/old Freda may be, Cedar is always going to support her.

Originality) Well the poses and such may be a bit generic, it's this kind of pose you have for Cedar that gives me the feels that family members support each other. So, I'm giving you a 3 and a half stars.

Technique) Gotta love the shading you have here, although it's difficult to tell where the light source is coming from, one end it looks like it's coming from the left and the other to the right, so the shadows is kind of here, there and everywhere. But you did a good job regardless.

Overall Impact) I'm giving this picture 4 stars out of 5! I think you did a very good job on this wonderful picture. I always liked your otter characters and I always liked the whole Wilkinson family.

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DCLeadboot In reply to AlexRaccoonGlider [2016-07-02 20:00:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique!

Well, yeah... the sisters are kind of fully-grown really. Cedar just happens to be big like their brother, while Freda takes more after their mother.

And I guess the light-source is more from the left here... I even turned the eye-lights round to the top-left.

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legendary-SaebaSan [2016-06-29 12:28:16 +0000 UTC]

They are both so cute. ^^

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DCLeadboot In reply to legendary-SaebaSan [2016-06-29 18:37:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, Kyo!

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legendary-SaebaSan In reply to DCLeadboot [2016-06-30 10:24:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome Dan. ^^

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Kelaiah [2016-06-28 23:11:36 +0000 UTC]

That's real sweet, that they're always there for each other.

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DCLeadboot In reply to Kelaiah [2016-06-29 07:38:48 +0000 UTC]

Indeed they are!
Thanks very much, Kel!

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Kelaiah In reply to DCLeadboot [2016-06-29 07:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome, bud.

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BluebottleFlyer [2016-06-28 22:20:00 +0000 UTC]

A very sweet sibling scene here, good to know that these two are here for each other.

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DCLeadboot In reply to BluebottleFlyer [2016-06-28 22:59:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, Mark!
Indeed they are.

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BruBadger [2016-06-28 20:49:48 +0000 UTC]

It's lovely that they are there for each other, this is a sweet pic of them too.

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DCLeadboot In reply to BruBadger [2016-06-28 22:59:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!

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SAGADreams [2016-06-28 20:27:01 +0000 UTC]

I like the female otters, girls for my Lutharie. Hehehehe!

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DCLeadboot In reply to SAGADreams [2016-06-28 22:58:54 +0000 UTC]

Heh, thanks?
Though it depends on if they already have boyfriends, of course...

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lectraplayer [2016-06-28 15:37:23 +0000 UTC]

They're so cute together.

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DCLeadboot In reply to lectraplayer [2016-06-28 22:58:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

Cedar: My sister's the cute one, really...
Freda: Awww, I'm not THAT pretty...

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DoubleSNL [2016-06-28 15:21:05 +0000 UTC]

I don't know why I think this, but the shading looks a bit.. too dark in the faces?

Besides that.. Good work  

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DCLeadboot In reply to DoubleSNL [2016-06-28 22:57:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Silvia!
Guess some parts did come out a little dark...

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