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Published: 2006-08-19 06:46:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 167; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description A rifle round fired into the sky--
the shot rings out over the vast
plains, undeterred, signaling the
accidental damage--a sore cloud,
greyed with age, relives memories
of its virgin days, then falls
with an inaudible cough.  The scene
registers not as a sequence--
this moment is anything but cinematic,
the whole of the murder enveloped
in a deafening crash.
Heartbeats and idle breaths pause,
letting the moment hang, the last
gasp before a sickening plunge,
the whistling of a dropping bomb,
the kiss before the deepest tragedy.
A wall of droplets suspended
in thick air, glistening before
the sunlight dies.
Can you see it?  This instant
where the heavens are laid bare,
casting away the sky's matte cloak
to reveal its pure naked body,
untouched, beckoning towards
trembling, watering eyes--know, now,
that beauty lives in pulses,
a perpetual cycle of attack and retreat,
sliding in and out of view--know
that the static soon becomes tired stone,
that motion gives rise to life,
that a fleeting memory captured
will soon wither and die.  Tear off
your wool coat and dark shoes!
Walk barefoot in the downpour!
Feel the crying lances sting away
your corrupt mask!  Forget yourself!
Yes, and remember yourself.
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Comments: 6

Muzakdude10 [2006-08-21 03:51:44 +0000 UTC]

your writing never ceases to amaze me

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dcschmo In reply to Muzakdude10 [2006-08-27 16:15:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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SilverBee [2006-08-20 17:04:29 +0000 UTC]

...a sore cloud,
greyed with age, relives memories
of its virgin days, then falls
with an inaudible cough.

I love that part.

We were stuck in a downpour just like this on Friday. We were so awed by the very large drops that when he and I decided to look straight up and watch them fall toward us, we were nearly transported to a new place. The rain was warm, the sun was shining brightly, the skies were amazingly clear and blue (I saw only a fleeting cloud moving out of the corner of my eye), yet here we felt it all falling on our faces and dampening our clothes.

It was surreal. This poem is surreal for me too, now.

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dcschmo In reply to SilverBee [2006-08-27 16:16:33 +0000 UTC]

I'm thrilled that this poem speaks to you like it does to me. <3

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levdir [2006-08-19 08:05:36 +0000 UTC]

I walked home through a storm a few days back. It was a purifying experience.

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dcschmo In reply to levdir [2006-08-19 14:52:03 +0000 UTC]

That experience is exactly what I had in mind.

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