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Decayed-Romance — Apple
Published: 2009-02-10 20:58:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 248; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Bite into the apple coreFor all its hidden glories
Smash and grind til there's no more
To release the secret stories
Once upon a time there was a tale
A demon and a fairy
Her wings would flitter and continue to flail
While he wold sit and eat his blood berry
Perhaps one day they come to meet
and strike up a conversation
But the the demon would decide to take a seat
And the fairy would no longer be a creation
To what do we owe
this odd little story?
Maybe a desire to know
Why anything was ever so gory
Comments: 7
As per the usual, your work is absolutely beautiful. It is fascinating, perfect, and well-written. I enjoy reading your poetry, as it happens to be perhaps one of the highlights of my otherwise meaningless day. Excellent work. Keep it up.
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Thank you so much
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I speak the truth, my friend. You're a year younger then me, yet you write a thousand times better. Keep it up.
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Fantasy is hard to work on, you just have to find your groove and get into it. Once you are done that, then it's only a matter of choosing the right adjectives etc. I'd like to see you attempt more fantasy literature, sometimes it's relaxing to dive into a world where anything is possible
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