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Published: 2009-01-12 06:29:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 164; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Stare into my eyesLook into my soul
I want to know why your cries
Sound like an old bell toll
I’ve searched the world
Only to be told
Your thoughts can’t be furled
And your heart must be cold
I don’t want to be
Not like this anymore
So you say, “Here’s the key.”
But there’s nothing forsworn
Cautiously head up the road
In your mind you’ve created
Another secret code
My heart can’t be so outdated
Your bags are packed up
My eyes have been left empty
I’m staring at this full cup
Just wondering why there can’t be
So we’ve come to an end
My fate has never been so crushed
My emotions all blend
Into something now untouched
Hate and disgust consume
My own love overthrown
Perhaps you’ve met your own doom
But I’m not fetching that bone
Comments: 8
Blogan [2009-01-12 23:07:30 +0000 UTC]
Great poem, and i hear you about the inspiration deal. I've gotten some great ideas at night...when I'm trying to sleep XD
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Decayed-Romance In reply to Blogan [2009-01-12 23:19:31 +0000 UTC]
haha, thanks
and for the fave
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kitsuene [2009-01-12 20:21:50 +0000 UTC]
these are beautifily written you really are good at writing and i know how it feels to suddenly get an idea in your head you can't get rid of
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Decayed-Romance In reply to kitsuene [2009-01-12 23:04:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, and sometimes that feeling can be bothersome
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