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Published: 2004-02-11 19:02:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Caught Mid-air


Feeling there
Like no one else
Caught mid-air
The face tells  

Silence...so still
Brings a desire
Even makes you
into a liar  

Waiting…
Waiting for that
phone call
To hear that voice …
my window in the wall  

Can’t run away
I am tied so tight
But it doesn't burn
the will to fight.
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Comments: 2

wildwildLizzy [2004-03-08 16:17:06 +0000 UTC]

I've been there hun...totally understand...don't know there will be a time when stuff like this doesn't happen...i always thought that as one grows older..these things pass..but ... I've found that when emotions get involved...it can still happen. nice writing.

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deepdot In reply to wildwildLizzy [2004-03-10 08:20:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.......the writing shows all my moods......this one obviously relates to one of those days when i feel lost and don't know where i am heading .........but don't worry......the next day i gather up my guts again......the phase never lasts long.....thank god for that........I am glad you liked the poem.

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