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DemonsInside — Control
Published: 2004-12-19 04:50:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 78; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description I feel the control
Leaving me to go
Somewhere else
The depression seeping in
Never have I felt
So Alone
The world against me
Life at a stand still
I don't know what to do
Where do I go?
What do I do?
Just someone please
HELP ME!
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Comments: 11

arseniclace [2004-12-21 07:21:48 +0000 UTC]

once again i like it,

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DemonsInside In reply to arseniclace [2004-12-21 07:23:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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arseniclace In reply to DemonsInside [2004-12-21 07:25:07 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome

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Infernoflow [2004-12-19 06:38:57 +0000 UTC]

I like your style, it's fresh compared to so many other poem writers.

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DemonsInside In reply to Infernoflow [2004-12-19 07:03:49 +0000 UTC]

i'm not going to begin to tell you how old that poem is... over a year... and thank you for the complient... you might want to check out Kasen, alleyninja, and maybe poroxide

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Ichijiku [2004-12-19 05:52:26 +0000 UTC]

Jesus H. Christ.

Lotta things submitted.



Old stuff, or new?


And, again, your style is interesting.

You're 1 of 2 people I've encountered that writes like this.

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DemonsInside In reply to Ichijiku [2004-12-19 06:55:23 +0000 UTC]

oh who is the other one... and its only 7 and old old old old it was from Gothic Tears (shut down whish is why i moved here)... and thank you

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Ichijiku In reply to DemonsInside [2004-12-19 06:59:53 +0000 UTC]

Still transferring them?

Yikes.

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DemonsInside In reply to Ichijiku [2004-12-19 07:09:32 +0000 UTC]

[link] i'm deleting as i transfer you tell me *notices she is being rude* oh sorry for that yea i'm still transfering

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Ichijiku In reply to DemonsInside [2004-12-19 07:20:38 +0000 UTC]

It's fine, not rude at all.

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DemonsInside In reply to Ichijiku [2004-12-19 07:25:05 +0000 UTC]

oh ok thats good

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