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Published: 2005-02-05 04:19:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 66; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Where is the fear?
Hidden within myself
Sought by all
And found by none
Love is that fear
Hidden from view
Written in stanzas
Is where my fear
Is found but
Can you find it?
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Comments: 3

CatchMeInTheRain [2005-07-23 18:44:24 +0000 UTC]

i like this one. short and to the point. you might want to use commas, periods, etc more often to show the reader where to stop and end the sentence. you don't have to if you don't want to though cuz it good as is also.

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Infernoflow [2005-02-05 20:23:17 +0000 UTC]

nice

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Xeiro13 [2005-02-05 04:22:33 +0000 UTC]

yes

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