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Published: 2007-09-10 23:26:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 269; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Close your eyes,And enter your subconscious world,
To dream about your desires,
And to face the not desired.
Explore a new world,
To see the unimaginable,
Where everything ends with a simple hello,
And starts with a complicated goodbye.
Expose my thoughts,
To drown them into his heart,
Hope for no changes,
But a beloved conversation.
But forget all the memories,
That hold the key to your future,
Return the paranoia,
To make a happy ending to a depressing day.
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Comments: 10
irfanpathan101 [2007-09-18 01:25:13 +0000 UTC]
this is very moving and beautiful! fantastic job!
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DephtsofDespair In reply to irfanpathan101 [2007-09-18 23:48:49 +0000 UTC]
thankyou ! im glad you think so :]
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DephtsofDespair In reply to karunderwaterx [2007-09-13 23:58:59 +0000 UTC]
aw thanks :]
glad you like ! (:
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rikuhottie263 [2007-09-11 20:20:09 +0000 UTC]
the last two stanzas i really REALLY like! AWESOME job!
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DephtsofDespair In reply to rikuhottie263 [2007-09-12 00:52:55 +0000 UTC]
ha thanks! :]
I love the whole poem! xD
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rikuhottie263 In reply to DephtsofDespair [2007-09-12 01:01:48 +0000 UTC]
yeah! btw, i forgot to say how nice the titel was!
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DephtsofDespair In reply to rikuhottie263 [2007-09-12 01:28:33 +0000 UTC]
Aww, thanks!
i really had a hard time on the title~
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