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DephtsofDespair — Staring with a complicated bye
Published: 2007-09-10 23:26:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 269; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description Close your eyes,
And enter your subconscious world,
To dream about your desires,
And to face the not desired.

Explore a new world,
To see the unimaginable,
Where everything ends with a simple hello,
And starts with a complicated goodbye.

Expose my thoughts,
To drown them into his heart,
Hope for no changes,
But a beloved conversation.

But forget all the memories,
That hold the key to your future,
Return the paranoia,
To make a happy ending to a depressing day.
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Comments: 10

irfanpathan101 [2007-09-18 01:25:13 +0000 UTC]

this is very moving and beautiful! fantastic job!

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DephtsofDespair In reply to irfanpathan101 [2007-09-18 23:48:49 +0000 UTC]

thankyou ! im glad you think so :]

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karunderwaterx [2007-09-13 22:50:34 +0000 UTC]


Another great poem!
One of my favorites!


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DephtsofDespair In reply to karunderwaterx [2007-09-13 23:58:59 +0000 UTC]

aw thanks :]

glad you like ! (:

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karunderwaterx In reply to DephtsofDespair [2007-09-14 02:44:29 +0000 UTC]


you're welcome

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rikuhottie263 [2007-09-11 20:20:09 +0000 UTC]

the last two stanzas i really REALLY like! AWESOME job!

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DephtsofDespair In reply to rikuhottie263 [2007-09-12 00:52:55 +0000 UTC]

ha thanks! :]

I love the whole poem! xD

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rikuhottie263 In reply to DephtsofDespair [2007-09-12 01:01:48 +0000 UTC]

yeah! btw, i forgot to say how nice the titel was!

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DephtsofDespair In reply to rikuhottie263 [2007-09-12 01:28:33 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks!

i really had a hard time on the title~

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rikuhottie263 In reply to DephtsofDespair [2007-09-12 01:35:37 +0000 UTC]

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