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Published: 2007-02-10 01:39:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description My life like an old dead tree branch,
Already dead, breaking waay from the world each day.
When you touch the broken branch, it breaks down abit by bit.
When you hurt me, I break down abit by bit.

I thought my heart was like a stone,
Never breakable, never going to feel pain.
Though I now learned it's like a small grain of sand,
One fragile move, and already broken, feeling pain.

Your love for me is like the ocean,
Always moving on, never coming back.
You hate for me is like a tree by the ocean side,
Staying in the same spot, watching the ocean, and not caring.

You broke a branch.
You broke me.
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Comments: 10

PeachXAlchemy [2007-02-12 00:25:56 +0000 UTC]

Awesome use of metaphors!!


Your love for me is like the ocean,
Always moving on, never coming back
--That's my favorite part. Keep it up!

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DephtsofDespair In reply to PeachXAlchemy [2007-02-12 00:34:35 +0000 UTC]

Thankyouuu <3 !

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rikuhottie263 [2007-02-10 03:42:40 +0000 UTC]

hey, thats really good! love the whole metaphor thing! yay you!

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DephtsofDespair In reply to rikuhottie263 [2007-02-10 12:54:49 +0000 UTC]

Thankyouu ! Glad you liked it. It was my first time doing something like this .

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rikuhottie263 In reply to DephtsofDespair [2007-02-10 16:10:39 +0000 UTC]

well, keeeep it up yup!

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DephtsofDespair In reply to rikuhottie263 [2007-02-10 16:41:18 +0000 UTC]

I willl !

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rikuhottie263 In reply to DephtsofDespair [2007-02-10 16:42:23 +0000 UTC]

yay!^_^!

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DephtsofDespair In reply to rikuhottie263 [2007-02-10 16:44:21 +0000 UTC]

:] !

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mustangblltt86 [2007-02-10 03:13:42 +0000 UTC]

very nice job!

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DephtsofDespair In reply to mustangblltt86 [2007-02-10 03:23:09 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou !

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