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deppression — Anger
Published: 2005-04-12 09:56:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 217; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description Anger

Why does the world always turn this way,
The world does spin,
Nothing left to say,
But i love you.





Fist clenched fury,
Eyes bleeding tears,
Hands crying blood,
Cloaked in darkest fears.

Run into this wall,
Vision tinged red,
With all things said,
I wish myself dead.

How can i end this pain,
By the blood of a bitch,
The fear, the hurt, the suffering,
How the dark does relish.

Yet i come to conclude,
In darkest despair,
For hopes not pursued,
And angers not rare.

That as black closes in,
And all light is lost,
Above piercing bright,
Falls his love just for us.
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Comments: 13

CrazyVato [2005-12-14 01:41:00 +0000 UTC]

Hey this is really good man, great job. Defiently going to fave this! Keep it up.

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SycSadist [2005-09-07 11:26:08 +0000 UTC]

i must sya i love the way u flow with your rymes its fast paced, yet i can still osak up evry little word and meaning just how i liek a pome i wish i could write as well

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deppression In reply to SycSadist [2005-10-02 10:50:34 +0000 UTC]

thanq an u ryt better way better

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moonlightfear [2005-04-13 09:35:45 +0000 UTC]

like the ending

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cblue [2005-04-13 06:54:34 +0000 UTC]

I like your poem. Your imagery is good too.
My favourite line is "fist clenched fury" - at first I thought of a clenched fist, but then reading it a second time, it seemed more like the adjective for "fury". Like the fury is all clenched up.

At the end of the poem, I'm not sure what you mean, but it almost seems like you're speaking about God.
Either way - it gives a nice feeling of hope after all the anger.

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deppression In reply to cblue [2005-04-18 09:25:48 +0000 UTC]

ure a genious i didnt thnk hardly ne1 wld get that lol

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dying-lonely [2005-04-13 03:21:14 +0000 UTC]

This is good. The rhyming schemem is nice and you've got good rhythm.

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Sykoticstalker27 [2005-04-13 01:54:42 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work!

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rhenna [2005-04-12 23:43:56 +0000 UTC]

thats really neat! i enjoyed that!

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SycSadist [2005-04-12 22:55:14 +0000 UTC]

its gr8, i write a lil read it sumtime gr8 to get advice rom a master AWSOME

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narcanity [2005-04-12 18:28:35 +0000 UTC]

though a few lines confused me, i thought this was really cool. it flows very well, and you have a talent for rhyming.

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arctic-gemini33 [2005-04-12 11:14:53 +0000 UTC]

I like

I'm an aspiring poet/photographer, and i'd love it if you'd look at my work!

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nalster73 [2005-04-12 10:15:46 +0000 UTC]

not bad... i like the ending, very strong than the rest of the poem.. which is good seeming that the whole piece is very emotive... i did find a few things though

"Nuthing left to say,"
spelt nothing wrong

"How can i end this pain,
By the blood of bitch,"
blood of bitch? dunno what you mean

good poem

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