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Published: 2005-07-11 11:03:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 270; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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I tried a map,I tried a guide,
I never found it,
Something died.
And as hopes did I lose,
My light just to flicker,
Heart fell to disuse,
Cobwebs cover my soul.
But as I break free,
Break free of this web,
I look down to see,
The ashes that be.
So to fan the embers,
Now down on my knees,
My forgotten hope,
In front . . . I to read.
I carefully follow,
The long dotted lines,
So entwined with my sorrow,
Where to I confide.
But along the parchment,
Shining light starts to pass through,
I begin my descent,
To look upon that which I knew.
I should have looked here first,
I now shake my head in this humour,
My heart filled to burst,
I see clearly this hour.
And with all my hope I ask,
I pray to God sincere,
That this may be to last,
My whole life
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Comments: 2
SycSadist [2005-09-07 11:28:48 +0000 UTC]
the vocab in this one is superb it perfectly compliments your usauly beatifull writing style n rythem flow i could dance a journy oin this one its perfect^^
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MissingYou [2005-08-09 05:12:50 +0000 UTC]
That's pretty awesome, a very good flowing structure. Good as ever. By the way remember me?
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