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Published: 2005-04-12 09:26:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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PleaseMy thoughts to you,
Like moth and flame,
Together we flew,
Fated the same.
All my life,
Waiting for a moment,
Through my pains an strife,
Tell me it's not torment.
I look to the sky,
The moon and the stars,
My emotions to fly,
To the heavens so far.
An through all my troubles,
I look to my gains,
My life now humbled,
Standing there still the same.
An i say,
If all might end,
Of most important things,
Will you still be my friend.
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Comments: 5
sorry...i didnt mean to post three times...my computer froze and i kept pressing the button...sorry
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good i like it and the rhyming is good as well. good poem i say...
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good i like it and the rhyming is good as well. good poem i say...lol
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good i like it and the rhyming is good as well. good poem i say...
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This is good. There are a couple places where the metre isn't quite right, but you could have made it that way... so I'll shutup now.
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