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Published: 2004-10-27 09:25:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 151; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 16
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There’s a gut wrenching pain in my chest,At first I thought It was nought but a test,
Till it ripped it tugged it stabbed at my heart,
And I knew for sure ‘twas we’re both apart.
I love her,
But I’m just to shy,
And I don’t know why.
She looks at me,
And what does she see,
Nothing but a friend,
But ‘round life’s hidden bends,
She’d see I loved her, and she was braking my heart.
I love her,
But I’m just to shy,
And I don’t know why.
I want to tell her that I love her so,
But as I walk to her I stand on my toe,
It’s just I have no guts,
As towards me she struts,
I love her,
But I’m just to shy,
And I don’t know why.
Now at her death bed I stand,
And come to realise,
That I had not found,
In her own eyes;
She loved me too,
And now I feel damned.
I loved her,
But I was just to shy,
And I still don’t know why.
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Comments: 2
LOSTACIDjoKer [2004-10-30 05:47:02 +0000 UTC]
Great poem very sad, but so strongly written, it flows fairly well, good piece, keep up the great work!!
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dying-lonely [2004-10-27 09:31:34 +0000 UTC]
this is good. i liek it. you need to work on your spelling, and it does seem a tad disjointed, but it has nice imagery
8/10
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