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Published: 2014-01-05 17:27:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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You can hide from the world,
but not from the brand on your shoulder.
You, who coaxed the tiny ant
through its own spiraled labyrinth;
You, who designed with intricate detail
not your refuge but your prison.
Oh, don't pretend you know the way -
you were lost before you stepped inside.

Now you're flying on your son's
melting wings.

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Comments: 6

saevuswinds [2014-07-18 20:30:14 +0000 UTC]

I have always loved the story of Daedalus. Such a sad, but interesting tale that has inspired poets, authors, and musicians alike. I'm glad to see it's inspired you as well. About the poem: I loved the last two lines. Powerful, strong endings in poetry always make me smile.

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Edges-to-Everything [2014-01-06 19:19:11 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could better express how much I like this. It has been years since I read any Greek mythology, and it was never a strong subject for me despite my interest in it. I have a Greek friend on Facebook with whom I will share this, because I believe she will enjoy it.

Then I will do some studying.

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DeriveAnemone In reply to Edges-to-Everything [2014-01-06 19:53:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I hope your Greek friend enjoys it.

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Edges-to-Everything In reply to DeriveAnemone [2014-01-07 18:34:51 +0000 UTC]

She liked it very much. I had to copy-and-paste it for her, though. She was having trouble connecting to dA for some reason.

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mightythedj23 [2014-01-05 17:29:12 +0000 UTC]

I love this! The theme, the take on the labyrinth, everything!

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DeriveAnemone In reply to mightythedj23 [2014-01-05 17:36:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!  

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