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we catch the hydrangeas
as they turn.
the blackberries burn with juice.
I am in the undertow of beauty
and I am crabbing for words;
they wash up sun-bleached on
the marsh
the harsh
hiss of the waves
grates the air
amaretto tangles
salted hair
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DailyLitRecognition [2015-11-30 04:34:34 +0000 UTC]
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLR (Daily Literature Recognition) in a news article that can be found here . Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by ing the News Article.
Keep writing and keep creating.
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Ceratomia [2015-09-27 00:41:08 +0000 UTC]
I love the flow & and the nuanced music in this, especially here:
"they wash up sun-bleached on
the marsh
the harsh
hiss of the waves
grates the air
amaretto tangles
salted hair"
That is how a living language really sounds.
Beautiful piece!
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Poetrymann [2015-09-26 05:51:58 +0000 UTC]
This amazing work is featured here:
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DC-26 [2015-09-02 03:33:31 +0000 UTC]
I was thinking this could go in that great anthology The Hungry Ear. Maybe I just like food (metaphors).
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AyeAye12 [2015-08-29 20:30:54 +0000 UTC]
A change in style, yes, but definitely a good one. Really like this :0
Especially "the blackberries burn with juice". What a genius image. Reminds me of Seamus Heany's "Blackberry Picking", because of course
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DeriveAnemone In reply to AyeAye12 [2015-08-30 14:03:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank youuu! Couldn't really compare it to Heaney myself though, although thanks.
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