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Published: 2009-03-01 22:55:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description this is what i've done so far for this drawing, i really want to try a new shading technique with this one but i need to find some new brush settings or experiment myself with them, also i was planning to add a a bit more to it so for now this is the rough concept for this drawing.

both character's are in the concept stage and subject to change.
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Comments: 8

theblueblue [2009-03-02 04:45:15 +0000 UTC]

I am slightly bothered by the rock texture because for some reason, it doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the word. I think that the rocks could benefit from having less texture so they didn't overpower the characters, but really, that is probably just my personal preference.

I'm not sure what I don't like about mr. Blindfold Onearm's lower body that bothers me, but something does. It might be that the hips are too low, it might be that the legs are too short, it might just be that I have a crazy view about what perspective is like now because I've been watching too much anime that takes liberties with stuff like that, I don't know, but something about his lower body seems slightly squished.

All in all it is a good piece, and I like it.

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destinyfactor In reply to theblueblue [2009-03-02 08:14:24 +0000 UTC]

thanks; now (FREAK OUT!!! about your criticism) lol just kidding. ya this was a test piece to get input on, i'm going to redraw the drawing anyway (when i get the time) i felt the same as well with his lower body as well so i'm going to fix it... oh BTW he's not one armed he just has his left arm behind his back... but thanks for the advice i'll work on it more, basicly i never did a rough drawing of my katana guy till now so i'm going to change him up again, and my blindfold guy i only drew once so i'm still getting the hang of these characters, and like in my artist comment the character's were in the concept stage.

well with these comment i think i know what i need to do... again thanks

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UraharaGreenHat [2009-03-01 23:13:12 +0000 UTC]

I like the stone's texture and reminds me of the SOul eater samurai : /

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destinyfactor In reply to UraharaGreenHat [2009-03-01 23:33:47 +0000 UTC]

ya i got the idea from him, i'm still working on making him different, like he doesn't carry the swords he's a Weapon Summoner and using a spell he can summon up to 100 katanas lol, i have a lot more info on that character but ya the idea for him started from Mifune

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UraharaGreenHat In reply to destinyfactor [2009-03-02 00:06:36 +0000 UTC]

Try to change the hairstyle and maybe the design of the swords in some way that make us forget Mifune : ) this way the char becomes more original!

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destinyfactor In reply to UraharaGreenHat [2009-03-02 00:52:20 +0000 UTC]

ya i forgot to add in my artist comment that the characters were in the concept stage so they were subject to change

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UraharaGreenHat In reply to destinyfactor [2009-03-02 00:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Ohs ok : )
But i really liked the pic!
Keep working on the chars ^^

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destinyfactor In reply to UraharaGreenHat [2009-03-02 01:11:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks, glad u like it

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