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Published: 2006-06-25 08:29:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 219; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Description Riptide

The tides are not predictable,
they can shift at any moment
and take you under with a rip,
slipping into places unknown to
yourself,

or others...

It took me to a cave,
I hid there well,
without knowledge of my
friends, family, foes..

I sat there for days,
contemplating the tides
that took me to this hidden
sanctuary of solitude and seclusion.

Maybe one day the tides will calm,
and I will emerge,
swimming slowly, steadily, towards normalcy.
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Comments: 4

blueluck72 [2006-07-03 00:05:56 +0000 UTC]

It's a very calming poem, nice job

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tildesk [2006-06-27 00:11:06 +0000 UTC]

great imagery. good work.

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somnomollior [2006-06-26 13:36:19 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes it is calming and necessary to hide away in a cave. I really like the poem. The whole idea of being sucked away by the tide into a cave is a good one and I thought you executed it well.

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Icyblues [2006-06-25 10:40:07 +0000 UTC]

Quick one, but I like the images, esp. the first few lines.

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