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DEVelopingDEViant — Love's Still-dying Corpse [NSFW]
Published: 2005-02-18 02:05:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 18; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description My broken heart lies in pieces on the ground.
Next to it I sit, hollow, empty, like your words.
Exsanguinated veins strangle my slit throat.
One hand holds the razor while the other,
     bleeding from the wrist,
     pushes your knife deeper into my back.
My broken legs can't get me out of this shallow hole,
     but you keep digging anyway.
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Comments: 2

lostinthecrowd [2005-02-18 05:12:25 +0000 UTC]

powerful poem. i think you could expand on it more. i like it though. use the anger karen! lol. just remember, this too will pass. and when you're looking back on this thinking god he was such a dumbass you can smile and laugh because you are so much better than him. <3

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setmyfire [2005-02-18 03:10:05 +0000 UTC]

you will be okay. it will get better. i love you, if its any consolation... call me soon

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