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deviant-elysium13o — Perfect sunset
Published: 2006-12-28 00:47:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description The perfect sunset
Which I have long awaited
Has now begun
And I am here to see it
for the very last time

It's been so long
since I last saw it
I'd already forgotten
How it looks like
But for the last time I am here, now

I wanted to see this
Just before I leave
I want to feel once again
The warmth of the sun
And the ocean's zephyr across my face

Before I leave
All of these I want to feel
Once more, to comfort me
And once I have done it
I will go and never come back.
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Comments: 6

Yunie-Miyu [2006-12-28 09:05:34 +0000 UTC]

Good poem! I really like this Fave for You, my dear

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deviant-elysium13o In reply to Yunie-Miyu [2006-12-28 19:24:43 +0000 UTC]

Merci beaucoup!!!! merci beaucoup!!! mon cher! mon cher ami!!Thank you very much!!

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Yunie-Miyu In reply to deviant-elysium13o [2006-12-28 19:57:09 +0000 UTC]

No problem ;*

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103512 [2006-12-28 03:41:01 +0000 UTC]

cool poem if it isnt a poem then its really good ill fav it ok really cool bud

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deviant-elysium13o In reply to 103512 [2006-12-28 19:25:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! thank you very much!! mon ami! mon ami!!

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103512 In reply to deviant-elysium13o [2006-12-29 06:36:45 +0000 UTC]

yay to yuo too cool yay ^_^

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