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Published: 2014-08-31 22:00:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 606; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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What do you doWhen you find out your god is a devil?
Do you stay by his side
And in his bloodshed revel?
Secretly hiding your disgust,
Wishing he knew when enough was enough.
Do you 'fall' from his grace,
When you share your distaste
For his primitive ideas,
And the control via fear?
Then face the wraith of his followers,
Who think they are warriors.
Do you stand by his victims,
And block the attacks?
Do you share in their pain?
Fortify them with facts?
Hoping you aren't alone,
Because you're still feeble and prone.
Do you try to show the others
The truths you have found?
But find no matter how loud you shout,
They don't hear a sound
Do you gasp at the bloodshed,
Spread by religion?
When gods order the deaths
of our fellow citizens.
And you're left to reel in horror,
As you realize it's real.
Watch as they cut into each other,
With self righteous zeal.
Choke on your vomit,
As you see the light fade from their eyes.
All in the name of a god
Who doesn't care who lives or who dies.
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Comments: 14
The fiction is that he DOES care -- and will reward his followers with all sorts of goodies for their atrocities.
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mmm I once went on a christian page pretending to talk about the devil but actually using quotes about god like how he likes the smell of burning flesh, the sheeple were eager to talk about lucifer and didn't respond at all when they found out i was talking about god.
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Man, you got cojones!!!! 
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Lol nah just a sense of humor
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Loan me some. I could put it to good use!
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Thrusts humor box in your direction
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You're not the only one who realized this. There are more of us.
We are the resistance. It won't be on this life, i think, but once You decease, we will find You and give You an offer... and a chance to pay off.
In this case, every single soul is important... every single soldier is needed.
~Phoenix
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Hello Deviantsaster,
First, I like your spark and your raw, vibrant originality. Most in this poem, "Evil God".
I wonder if you know of a late poet named Sri Aurobindo, east Indian, who wrote one called, "Who", that you can find with Google. I feel it completes the powerful arc you have created into a sphere. Even more, in The Glory and Fall of Life canto out of The Book of the Traveler of the Worlds in his epic poem, SAVITRI--to me that blows everything else away (also a Google).
Last, I've been a poet for a long time, noticed some technique stuff of yours, and wonder if you want that kind of comment as compost for your future poems. I'm easy either way you react. If yes, write me an email, ronald@foxinternet.net and I'll get it much faster.
rtjdac
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Thank you very much, I'll be sure to save your email. I'll send you an email now so that you have mine and I shall google the above mentioned
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