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deviantscythe — Life and Death
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Published: 2006-12-22 03:20:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 60; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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in this life that guides and follows winding paths,your one true goal gets closer ever waiting to come to pass
lights at end of tunnels a brightness overcomes,
you sit and dream of the day when over it is done
but what we do and how we fair are always placed on us,
the thrill of hunt a ride of life a never stopping bus
this ticket lasts through all our lives no trading can we do,
for as we die this ticket fades as breath escapes from you.
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Comments: 3
Very beautiful and deep.
I think the last two lines are my most favorite in this poem.
I love the words you use to create the image.
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yeah this was a really easy one to write but personally i still dont think its as in depth as i would have liked but hey... my brain froze and i couldnt do any more
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