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deviantscythe — The Red Experience by-nc-sa
Published: 2007-02-14 08:28:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 91; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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That day we met with hair of blue and knee-high boots on show,
d20 round your neck was fastened a friendship then did grow
I felt a pull towards you then and leaving with goodbye,
a note you wrote into a scrap a forum where i said hi

A chat invite from unknown user but soon to become my friend,
an invite to a party after what never seemed to end
Drive to a place far from home i'd never been before,
i searched the street for half an hour until finally at your door

A welcome from you as a dom a nurse did seem to follow,
i joined the party with unknown faces feeling all alone and hollow
A friendly face that i did spy mum stops to say hello,
we grab the cake and light the candles happy birthday seems to flow

Later on i look around and see you sitting on his knee,
a kiss shared between you both a sorrow starts in me
I do not worry for you are taken a place i will not go,
back to the fun more drinks are had my costume is on show

I fall asleep in the lounge dog sitting at my feet,
im woken by the sounds of talking im half hanging out my sheets
This sunday morn im now awake with nothing else to do,
i fall behind black car of his on way to see day through

We sit around and talk for hours i dare not let this end,
for in you have i found a great and awesome attractive friend
An invite recieved to the table where i play D & D,
you come along and see our fun your face smiles bright with glee

Out on the town a photo trip and darkness turns to day,
yet back at home on fold out couch things start to go astray
You've bit my arm in jest and i now have raked your back,
we stop and look at what we do and realise what this lacks

This situation we are in it shouldnt have even started,
our feelings for eachother show now sorrow when we're parted
Again we're out on photo shoot our feelings do not show,
good times we feel when we're together this fate i do not know

Leaving with worry sadness looms a fight between you two,
yet call me still to pick you up my face you wish you knew
Some hours spent a group of three all knowing what went on,
now take you back to my place where all the pain starts from

A dance in darkness lit up by light that lasts all night and day,
with feelings known now shared between we leave and part this way
An emptyness stays with me now your feelings i dont know,
is it with me or it with him your affection doesnt show

I leave the state to clear my head a rest that needs to be,
but as im gone you sever ties on drunken sayings thee
Now on return a knife in back another takes my place,
i once called friend now enemy now shunned for this disgrace

You leave him too and shy away more lives for you to taint,
but as we look your version of the story paints you saint
Now months gone past my memory sharp this lesson is well learned,
but pining for the 1st you loved your heart now seems to yearn

This guy who did not one thing wrong but state a simple fact,
no money would he spend on you will never take you back
We've all moved on and lines left cut you're severed from our lives,
now all alone you winge and moan but it comes as no suprise.

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Comments: 2

Pixi-Productions [2007-03-08 17:49:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow there is a lot of emotion in this piece.

I like how you structured this a poem and a story at the same time. Kind of makes me think of something a Bard would tell well sitting around a camp fire.

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deviantscythe In reply to Pixi-Productions [2007-03-09 13:48:49 +0000 UTC]

Its kinda ironic you should mention a bard, because one of the people in this poem would think of herself as somewhat of a story teller.

This is actually a poem regarding a period of about 3-4 months of my life in which i learned a great deal about myself and how to or how not to deal with other people.

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