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Published: 2013-12-28 09:29:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 292; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I didn't know it would be like this.
It feels like I'm forever falling;
the bottom isn't in sight, but the threat of it is there.

Things hit me on the way down,
bringing me back to reality.
I don't like it there, but it feels safe.

I want to stay falling forever;
without a care in the world.
The colours are brighter,
the air fresher,
and that's where you are.

We're falling together;
hand and hand.
The world is none the wiser.

The risk is great,
but the whirlwind of feelings is greater.
Please, fall with me forever.
Let's go to Wonderland.
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Comments: 4

lshack [2016-03-20 06:11:48 +0000 UTC]

The lover plight of flight.
It's bright and dark for love.
Love is beautiful and deadly.
Stabbing both and dragging
Both together

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Writer-Guy-NC [2014-01-30 02:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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wnyjj55 [2013-12-28 16:42:46 +0000 UTC]

Fascinating reading.  And so much unwritten.  Is it a fall of exhilaration or despair?  Falling with someone, but is that company or cause?
Writing that leaves so many questions is excellent writing.

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devianttherapy In reply to wnyjj55 [2014-01-04 07:51:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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