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Published: 2013-12-28 09:29:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 292; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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I didn't know it would be like this.It feels like I'm forever falling;
the bottom isn't in sight, but the threat of it is there.
Things hit me on the way down,
bringing me back to reality.
I don't like it there, but it feels safe.
I want to stay falling forever;
without a care in the world.
The colours are brighter,
the air fresher,
and that's where you are.
We're falling together;
hand and hand.
The world is none the wiser.
The risk is great,
but the whirlwind of feelings is greater.
Please, fall with me forever.
Let's go to Wonderland.
Comments: 4
lshack [2016-03-20 06:11:48 +0000 UTC]
The lover plight of flight.
It's bright and dark for love.
Love is beautiful and deadly.
Stabbing both and dragging
Both together
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wnyjj55 [2013-12-28 16:42:46 +0000 UTC]
Fascinating reading. And so much unwritten. Is it a fall of exhilaration or despair? Falling with someone, but is that company or cause?
Writing that leaves so many questions is excellent writing.
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