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devil-child — could it be
Published: 2003-08-22 18:38:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 93; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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hearts racing, hearts poundingalways loving, never stopping
being with you dont seem real
never know i could feel
as mad about you as i do
constant thinking - always you
i hope to love you all my life
never want to sacrifice
this feeling for you - much too strong
hope it lasts forever long
when we're apart it hurts so bad
a need you here for me to have
maybe one day it will progress
someday we can both posess
true love in every shape and form
always knowing your the one
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Comments: 7
i love this poem. it captures more than your feelings. it has captured mine too. there is a feeling of almost desparation, and a fear of loss. would you mind if i printed this off for myself.
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not at all!! i'm glad someone like it!!!! its my very first poem......thank you for the comment
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its it really your first poem? or your first posted on here?
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my first one full stop!! i was rather happy with it
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late reply. for a first that is amazing. keep writing them. dont deprive the world!!
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thank you sooo much for that lovley coment!!!! i'm happy someone likes my poetry!!
thank you sooo much
xxxx
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no problem. i have some of my own. well one at the moment in my account if you wanna see
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