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Published: 2013-01-06 10:05:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 436; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Clean as the sea
Sad as the sky
Her thoughts won't let her be
The days are passing by

A residue of sorrow rests in her soul
Another day's tomorrow, another deep, dark hole
She was a princess, now she's nothing but a whore
No alcohol or drugs can help her anymore.

Abandonment destroyed her, shredded all her hope
He didn't give a damn about her, or how she will cope
Yet still every day she waits for his call
Yet still every day, her hope shatters like a porcelain doll

The colorful world turned dark and gray
She lost her faith, she will no longer pray
Her makeup is smeared, her eyes are plain
She may never recover and be happy again.
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Comments: 3

Blood-Banker-J [2013-02-15 23:05:54 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... I really like this. But its written kind of odd. Its seems to alternate from what feels like a 1st person experience to a more distant 3rd person who offer a sad kind of wisdom.

Its sounds like a short legend kind of story.

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DEVIL-LIVED In reply to Blood-Banker-J [2013-02-16 19:42:06 +0000 UTC]

Really? Because I never once switched from her to I. Where exactly did it sound odd?

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Blood-Banker-J In reply to DEVIL-LIVED [2013-02-28 04:59:48 +0000 UTC]

I know but thats how it sounds to me

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