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Description Name: Miriam Walker
Age: 19
Height/Weight: 5'6"/ 130 lbs
Hometown/Region: Celadon City, Kanto
Military Faction: Kanto Air Force
Extra Items: Goggles, Cross Necklace, Sabre


Personality: When someone first meets Miriam, they see her as a cold and untrusting individual. This is actually a pretty accurate description where strangers are concerned. She is scathingly sarcastic, aloof and exceedingly stubborn. She doesn’t trust people easily and has few friends who can get past her cold exterior. However, she is insanely loyal to friends and can be courageous in a desperate situation.
She is extremely self-confident to the point of vanity, and it has gotten to her in trouble before. Miriam is fairly reckless and often acts before she thinks. She also has difficulty accepting authority when it is wielded with an iron fist.

History: Miriam was born into Old Money. She wanted for nothing in her life and she adored her mother, who was kind and gentle. Her father was stern, but compassionate. However, when Miriam was nine, a couple months after her younger brother was born, her mother left the house to go to the market and never returned. The following search turned up nothing but a few feral Pokémon. This led Miriam to hate Pokémon, as she believes that they are somehow deeply connected to her mother’s death.
After her mother’s disappearance, her father became stricter. Her grandparents, who had been a minor presence in her life before, came to live with the small family. Miriam’s grandmother was as overbearing as her father, and the house soon became stifling to the girl.
She admired her grandfather immensely. He had served in the Kanto Air Force before retiring to while away his days. He died peacefully when Miriam was 15, willing her his goggles and his officer’s cap, which she treasures.
When Miriam turned 19, her father began talking about marriage and she had had enough. She gathered together a small bag of personal effects, wished her brother well and left the house. She put in her application for the military the next day.

She aspires to become like her stolid grandfather, as well as show her father that she is more than a pretty china doll to be wed to the highest bidder.

Other Info:
- She is an accomplished fencer. However, she has never had a real sword fight, so her skill level in an unsafe environment is unknown
- She cannot read a map to save her life. God help her.
- She admires Military officers (especially in the Air Force) immensely, but refuses to show it
- She is actually very sheltered, despite what she thinks. Hopefully, being in the military will open her eyes
- Disgusted that Pokémon have to be a part of military service

Pokémon

Russell | Fearow | Hasty Nature | Keen Eye | Male
Russell was chosen as Miriam’s partner when she stated the she didn’t really care what she got, as long as it had wings. He is mean, hot-tempered and quick to violence. He grew up in a flock and took on all the qualities of an alpha spearow.
He has already given Miriam her first scar, where he viciously dug his talons into her forearm. Their relationship doesn’t look like it’ll be getting better anytime soon.

Upon his evolution, his mean streak escalated to frightening proportions. However, he started to listen to Miriam when he discovered that she had a few redeeming qualities (navigation not being one of them).
If he doesn't like the orders she gives, though, he'll be sure to let her know how much he dislikes them.

Bennie | Kirlia | Impish Nature | Trace | Male
Bennie took to being captured and trained like a fish to water. He was given to Miriam to help try and control Russel's heightening aggression towards allies. One of his few pleasures is messing with the larger and stronger fearow, even if it ends with him getting a few bumps and bruises in the process.
As a secondary bonus, his ability to communicate with Miriam might help her get over her extreme dislike of pokemon.

His evolution has provided Bennie with a much need power boost, as well as gaining some mental maturity. He has seen war and he doesn't like it. He doesn't understand it. And he wants nothing to do with it. However, he has bonded to Miriam quite soundly and refuses to leave her.

Odile | Froslass | Bold Nature | Snow Cloak | Female
Odile is a fully trained pokemon of war. She was reassigned to Miriam when her previous trainer was KIA. Unlike Russel, who is basically a wild pokemon and just mean, Odile is a highly sadistic ghost type with a mindset that the more humans she kills, the better.

The sole reason she hasn't attempted to turn on Miriam is that Bennie practically begged her not to. Odile took an instant (and almost psychotic) liking to the little ralts. She dotes on him, swearing to listen to the detestable human so long as Bennie wants her to.

Odette | Charizard | Jolly Nature | Blaze | Female
Assigned to Miriam after she lost the ability to fly planes, Odette is also a well suited solution to Odile. She is pure power and was brought up and trained for battle. She is also large enough to accommodate two passengers and is trained to keep the safety of her pilot first and foremost on her mind.

Unlike Odile, she loves people. To bits. Miriam experienced this first hand during their first training session. She discovered charizards are rather heavy.

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Haha, so here’s my entry for End Run, a Pokémon original character tournament.


It was funny when I was in the middle of making her, I decided I should check out the generals. Her history turned out to be pretty similar to Evelyn, the Air Force general, which I thought was weird. I swear I didn’t copy her, it just sort of happened. At least Miriam has a different personality?

She has so much more back story, but I just gave the cliff notes version = u = I figure I should leave some of her a mystery so she can grow.

Also, I will hate myself because of her hair, necklace and Russell’s wings. Since I’ve decided to make all my Pokémon more “life-like” I can’t wimp out on easy wings >.>

I was also not meant to research history. My scientific brain imploded from information. It is so much mush.

Entry take 2: I was a bit sad that she was rejected at first, but then all I could think of was this big, burly guy ripping into her. "TAKE OFF THOSE BELTS. TIDY UP THAT COAT. TUCK YOUR PANTS INTO YOUR BOOTS. THIS IS THE MILITARY, RECRUIT. NOT SOME FANCY PANTS FASHION SHOW."
And then I could not stop giggling.



EDIT1: ROUND 1 has been passed. So upgrades and what not.

Based Russel's evolution on the harpy eagle [link] , which is the second largest eagle in the world.

Bennie will be interesting as I have never drawn a ralts or its evolutions, nor used them in any game I have ever played. So it'll be a learning curve for this one.
... Now that I think about it... I don't think I've ever used a psychic type .__.


EDIT 2: HOMG I PASSED ROUND 2. HOW IS THIS EVEN?
App updated with kirlia and froslassssss <3 Let's see if I can do evil and sadistic in pokemon, shall we?


EDIT 3: HOW DO I KEEP PASSING? I DON'T UNDERSTAND. I JUST.... ALL MY FEELS ALL OVER.
Weird app update. Taking my fav pictures of most of my pokes. Bennie did not get an update, but that's cause I ran out of time, and I promised this update would be done orz
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Comments: 7

MinisterFiddler [2012-06-27 07:06:58 +0000 UTC]

HELLO SOLDIER! PLEASE VOTE FOR ME WALTER FIDDLER FOR KANTO MINISTER OF DEFENSE BEING HELD ON OR AFTER JUNE 30TH

Keep up the good work soldier!
And if you turn rouge, then shame on you.

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devil62 In reply to MinisterFiddler [2012-06-28 03:28:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh I will, sir. You're looking at the wrong girl if you're worried about defectors
And thank you for the watch, as well!

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TheUnawareThing [2012-05-27 14:15:35 +0000 UTC]

Why did I not see this? >8U We both have an evolved form of Ralts and a Froslass! What a coincidence! Also, both of their personalities match! We're defenitely not the same person, nope, nuh-uh. XD

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devil62 In reply to TheUnawareThing [2012-05-27 18:39:10 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, just read your app and you are correct. Obviously the only way that froslass can be are evil. XD
Even better is I've been planning on evolving Bennie into a gallade.

And the reason you did not see is that you are on the wrong side .___.
I believe this may call for an epic air battle some time in the future.

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TheUnawareThing In reply to devil62 [2012-06-02 07:50:55 +0000 UTC]

YES. AN EPIC BATTLE IS NEEDED. WITH BOTH OUR FROSLASS AND GALLADE. 8U

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BellicoseBreakfast [2012-01-13 05:26:33 +0000 UTC]

"NOT SOME FANCY PANTS FASHION SHOW."

Here's hoping she gets in later on. Seems like an interesting character.

End Run looks fairly intriguing.


Critiques, if you want them:

She wears the necklace outside her jacket collar?

If she's in the air force, and can't read a map, she's screwed.

There seem to be discrepancies between the picture and the description. For example, the picture attributes the hat and goggles to the grandfather, without attributing the necklace to anyone, but the description attributes the necklace and cap to her grandfather. Also, the picture says that she joined the military mostly to spite her father, but since she is using things her grandfather left her, perhaps he played more a role in it than the short description hints at. Especially since she had a brother, so pressure to marry (depending on setting) would probably be less intense than if she were an only child. And it says she admires military officers, so that would be another factor beyond simple spite.

I don't think "to a fault" applies to things that are already negative. "Trustworthy to a fault" makes sense because it's "positive" but taken to an extreme results in problems, thus "to a fault". For something that's already negative, it makes less sense. Being stubborn is already a fault.

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devil62 In reply to BellicoseBreakfast [2012-01-13 07:18:31 +0000 UTC]

Aww, helping me improve my character. I feel so loved

Here is hoping. I'd like to get farther than applying this time

In reply to your critiques:
She'll probably wear the necklace on the outside of her jacket when she's stressed. I can see her fiddling with it when she's nervous. Otherwise, I'm just going to say it is underneath and try to save some of my sanity.

Yes. Yes she is screwed. She is going to have to learn fast, or become a lamprey on another recruit in her squad. It is one thing that I'm planning on fixing someway or another in the future (hopefully).

Descrepencies will mostly be fixed. I maintain that the majority of her reason to join the military was to infuriate her father. She has a few other reasons to join, as well. It was just her father was the one who really pushed her into it (inadvertantly, but he did).

She's nine years older than her brother, and her father doesn't want to wait nine years to solidify familial connections.

And I shall fix those English... thingies. The words that sounded better in my head

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