HOME | DD

Devilloc — Missing Isabelle by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-12-14 21:13:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
Redirect to original
Description Missing Isabelle

I walk through the empty halls of this Victorian mansion,
but the sound of you playing the piano no longer accompanies me.
Through visions of the past, haunting me with every step.
Everything that out-lived you has decayed…

As I sit on my couch, there is no light shinning on me anymore.
All the candelabra lay broken and empty.
The scent of your candles has long vanished from here,
your presence is no longer felt.
Wind comes through the broken window,
making the ripped curtains flow like ghosts.
Ghosts of our past. Of you. Of us…
Ghosts I’ve tried so hard to forget.
To move on…
But they’ll always be there.

This was once the cradle of our love.
Now, it is no more than a shadow of what it once was.
Sometimes I can still hear the whispers we shared,
echoing throughout the halls.
Sometimes, when I look outside at night
I can see you, your ebony hair flowing in the wind.
I always call out for you, but it’s as if you can’t hear me.

Is it all just a vision?
No, it can’t be.
I know you’re there…
Sometimes, when I lay in my bed at night,
I can still feel your hand, caressing my hair, just as I fall asleep.
It eases this pain inside, and reminds me of a better time.
The memory of your touch gives me a calming feeling,
which I haven’t felt since you past away.
And sometimes… Just sometimes…
I hear your voice, whispering your last words to me:
“Love never dies…”


Rafael 'Devilloc' Sousa
21.06, 14-12-2008
Related content
Comments: 6

aFteRLifeR [2008-12-19 17:10:55 +0000 UTC]



love it. love the pictures. this would be very good in prose as well. :]

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Devilloc In reply to aFteRLifeR [2008-12-19 20:15:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. (=

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Aerzaal [2008-12-16 07:09:16 +0000 UTC]

... I'm at a loss for words.

And who would let you use their name in something so sad? Crazy people and their tragedies...

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Devilloc In reply to Aerzaal [2008-12-16 11:16:24 +0000 UTC]

Does that mean you liked it, or hated it?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Aerzaal In reply to Devilloc [2008-12-16 22:06:53 +0000 UTC]

I like the idea and the story of it, but I think it could have come out better. It was a little awkward in places.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Devilloc In reply to Aerzaal [2008-12-16 22:18:48 +0000 UTC]

Win some, lose some. *shrug*

👍: 0 ⏩: 0