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O BeijoAli estivemos, mais uma vez.
Num tempo que parece infinito
ao mesmo tempo que parece durar apenas 5 segundos...
É muito, é pouco, não sei.
Tinha algo a dizer,
mas as palavras ficaram na garganta.
Tinha algo a fazer,
mas as acções não saíram do cérebro.
E então ali estaremos, mais uma vez,
só mais uma... Ou então não.
Deixa-me tentar outra vez.
Desta vez eu prometo que o faço...
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Comments: 6
aFteRLifeR [2011-06-24 08:32:13 +0000 UTC]
A moment that seems infinite but only lasts 5 seconds..
i translated this, but online translation is a bit shitty, you know.. make an english version for me pleaase it seems quite beautiful
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Devilloc In reply to aFteRLifeR [2011-06-24 08:36:25 +0000 UTC]
A direct translation would ruin it completely. I'll make a proper english version, one that transmits the same feelings but with slightly different sentences. It won't be nearly as heartfelt as this one, but I'll do it just for you.
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aFteRLifeR In reply to Devilloc [2011-06-24 08:40:29 +0000 UTC]
yeah, i know something always gets lost in the translation. thank you
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Devilloc In reply to aFteRLifeR [2011-06-24 08:44:24 +0000 UTC]
This is what I was able to do. It's ruined, tbh... I had to make a direct translation, otherwise it'd just be a different poem, y'know. Myeh. This is probably similar to what you got online.
The Kiss
There we were, once again.
In a moment that feels infinite
while at the same time it feels like it only lasts for about 5 seconds...
It's a lot, it's a little, I'm not sure.
I had something to say,
but the words got stuck in my throat.
I had something to do,
but the actions themselves never left my brain.
So there we'll be, one more time.
Just one more... Or maybe not.
Let me try it once again.
This time I promise I'll do it...
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aFteRLifeR In reply to Devilloc [2011-06-24 08:47:43 +0000 UTC]
it's very beautiful. when i learn portuguese i will appreciate the original version
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