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A life of painOf misery.
A life of doubt
And regret.
This is the life
I live for.
End this pain
No more will he gain.
Make it stop
Took down by a cop.
Take his name
Put him to shame.
Close his eyes
Hide his lies.
Put a rose on his chest
And remember him at his best.
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Comments: 13
guacharro [2004-02-17 15:03:44 +0000 UTC]
You are an incredible writer. I'm loving the dark poetry.
Jess
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devilskitten In reply to guacharro [2004-02-18 23:23:29 +0000 UTC]
Hey thanks. I like the dark poetry as well. I seem to be writing it a lot lately. Haha. Dont know why. Haha.
Thanks
~Ciao
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PurplePills [2004-02-15 08:40:03 +0000 UTC]
Hey How expressive it is it tells it all with some-words of mind i like it all you keep it up you can go far with it all if you know what i mean !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~stephanie~~~
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devilskitten In reply to PurplePills [2004-02-15 08:46:27 +0000 UTC]
Hey thanks a lot. Its good to get comments like that. Thanks so much. And ya I thgink my friend described it pretty well. I like it. It was kinda confusing when I wrote it and could not think of a title. Oh well. She did. Thanks again
~Ciao
~Kat
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night-symphony [2004-02-15 08:28:19 +0000 UTC]
awsome I like one agian do you have no limit?? lol its a good thing
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devilskitten In reply to night-symphony [2004-02-15 08:47:22 +0000 UTC]
I have no limit. Haha. Never will. I love to write. Haha. Thanks.
~Ciao
~Kat
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night-symphony In reply to devilskitten [2004-02-15 08:48:41 +0000 UTC]
well you are a good writer its something to be proud of
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devilskitten In reply to night-symphony [2004-02-15 08:50:11 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I am proud of it. Thanks.
~Ciao
~Kat
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devilskitten In reply to night-symphony [2004-02-15 08:54:53 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha. Thanks so much. Makes me feel good. A little blushin now, but what can you do. Haha. Thanks
~Ciao
~Kat
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darkestayngel [2004-02-15 08:26:41 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha the way you put it makes me feel smart. No problem Kitty, your poetry inspires me!
Feigned glory -- Realistic Fall
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~*~Love from an Ayngel~*~
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devilskitten In reply to darkestayngel [2004-02-15 08:49:01 +0000 UTC]
You are smart and dont let anyone tell you otherwise. If they do I will kill them. Hahaha. Jk. Haha. Thanks for the inspiration from you as well. And the name to my poem.
~Ciao
~Kitty
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