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devilskitten — My Life as a Shadow
Published: 2005-01-03 22:52:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 349; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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Description And as I walk through the valley
Of the shadow of death.
My soul is snapped out
In my last quick breath.

My eyes get whiter
As I lose all sight.
And soon my mind
Begins to lose all fright.

My skin begins to fade
As it grows ever more pale.
Then my heart stops to beat
As it begins to fail.

Hair now black and thick
Running down to my feet.
Wings grow from my back
With the tips touching the street.

My life now a shadow
As I walk down the ally.
Killing all the flowers I touch
Walking in the valley.
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Comments: 21

RobynTheArtRat [2005-07-25 12:45:09 +0000 UTC]

Cool poem - interesting idea, starting with a line you've heard that inspires you and going from there.......good way to get the creative juices flowing.

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devilskitten In reply to RobynTheArtRat [2005-07-26 01:31:59 +0000 UTC]

Hey thanks for the comment. Yeah the song was in my head and then I just started to make my own poem out of it. And it worked.

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Goofywantsu [2005-03-11 17:44:19 +0000 UTC]

Very good Hun I can't wait to see the finished piece!!!

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AkiroIkeda [2005-03-11 04:55:22 +0000 UTC]

I like it! I love how the end does tie in with the beginning, makes it a well rounded poem. And it has great imagery (yeah can't spell, I hope that's spelled right but it looks wrong...anyway) I want to see this finished picture now!

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devilskitten In reply to AkiroIkeda [2005-03-11 21:05:05 +0000 UTC]

I would like to scan the finished picture. It would look a lot better. Thanks very much for the compliment.

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AkiroIkeda In reply to devilskitten [2005-03-11 21:09:01 +0000 UTC]

welcome ^_^

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darkestayngel [2005-03-11 00:18:25 +0000 UTC]

The finished piece looks great! The hair and face (minus the really long parts of her hair) actually look like you as well! Good job Meow-meow!

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devilskitten In reply to darkestayngel [2005-03-11 21:03:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the compliment. Its not totally done yet I would like to scan the picture and colour it as well. It might be better.

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prettysenshi2k6 [2005-02-11 13:57:54 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful piece.

I just hope you don't feel like that all the time.

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devilskitten In reply to prettysenshi2k6 [2005-02-11 21:02:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks you very much for the comment. And no I don't feel like this all the time. LoL. I just write how I feel sometimes, or things that come to mind.

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darkestayngel [2005-01-12 23:00:07 +0000 UTC]

It fits very well with the pic (hahaha cause y'know *I've* seen it ) But it works well and it all ties together very well. Good imagery as well.

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devilskitten In reply to darkestayngel [2005-01-13 04:30:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hun. Anf *you* have seen the picture. LoL. But the coloured version is not done yet. Not that it will be that great coloured. But meh. Thanks for the comment

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darkestayngel In reply to devilskitten [2005-01-14 21:58:34 +0000 UTC]

welcome welcome

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darkvenom [2005-01-10 11:00:31 +0000 UTC]

its a beautiful poem, i like the imagery a lot. and the first two lines are originally from the bible i think, or some religious passage, bone thugs have also used it, and manson has too, though i think manson reworded it somehow, i cant remember. but i like the poem kitty, wicked stuff

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devilskitten In reply to darkvenom [2005-01-10 23:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Thats James. I couldnt think of where exactally it was from. I knew I heard it in songs and on TV and all, but I couldnt think of where. So I made sure I said it was not mine. LoL. Thanks fr the comment. I'm working on the picture for it. She's not that great, but I'm trying. LoL. (the character) Thanks again for the comment hun.
Ciao

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darkvenom In reply to devilskitten [2005-01-11 10:09:29 +0000 UTC]

ooo cool, i wanna see i wanna see

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devilskitten In reply to darkvenom [2005-01-12 04:00:39 +0000 UTC]

I can e-mail you a picture of it so far. Its not exactally done. I made another copy of it so I can colour it. I'll e-mail it to you.

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darkvenom In reply to devilskitten [2005-01-12 09:59:23 +0000 UTC]

wow kitty! the pic looks great so far and i see nothing wrong with the hands! she's looking great so far anyway, love the hair and wings and the delicate yet strong pose she has

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devilskitten In reply to darkvenom [2005-01-12 22:22:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks James. And her fingers are kinda crooked. When I get the other one done then, I will put it up. It should be exciting. I am colouring a copy of it and hope to have it up soon.

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oneinmany [2005-01-09 15:53:30 +0000 UTC]

the ending is beautiful..creates a sort of symetery with the beginning. Walking through the valley of sahdowed death...becoming a shadow. Its very pretty.

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devilskitten In reply to oneinmany [2005-01-09 22:42:41 +0000 UTC]

What you very much. Yeah I didn't realise it while I was writing it but then I read it and it worked that way.

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