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devilsquirrel — the time has come
Published: 2006-04-14 13:47:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description The time has come,
the night is near,
my brother waits
for my call farewell.  
My time has come.  They bid be well.
I say goodbye to my past.  
My freedom’s gone,
I am a slave.  
A servent, to
bow down to a strange man
who calls himself
master.
What cruel fate have the
gods cast down on me?  
My brother waits
in the hidden path
where dreams are
born.  
Freedom.
They say it is possible.  
Brother wants me to run away,
I can tell
from the signals she gives.  
I have been taught to be
brave,
but I am frightened.
Shall I go and risk
death?
Or go insane
kneeling at the dust
at my
masters feet?  
If I run master will shoot me.  


Brother was found.  
They have killed my brother.  
But I live on.
why have the gods
not picked me
in place of him

Master has set me
free
what do the gods request of me?
the pain is still
strong
and will live forever.

the time has come...
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Comments: 2

darkhorse5 [2006-04-15 13:14:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm actually surprised, as I rather like this. It tells the story without being confusing and there aren't any parts that don't flow well. Reread teh description, though...

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devilsquirrel In reply to darkhorse5 [2006-04-16 13:48:50 +0000 UTC]

k will do.

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