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Published: 2006-05-21 06:43:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 312; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Just resubmitting this as I've done some more work to it. i've made the head a little smaller, added an ear(trying to make it look less ghosty)... But yeah I never really liked this, and a friend of mine asked if I'd sell it... and personally I couldn't bring myself to sell something I hated, so I tried to improve it a bit... I don't know if I really succeeded though... I'll have to stare at it a bit more.Related content
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heheheh you're a strange one sean
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EH! aggabooboo! shmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeee! ... me strange?
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well my eye goes to the mouth..its so black...so to me that is the focus point and not so interesting..maybe bring out another feature of the face so to draw more attention on such an interesting subject..id rather look at the guy than the blackness of the open mouth, the lil guy looks fuzzed out abit...its really cool, but i think it needs more work on the focus point or composition, either or will work if u plan on changing it
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what do you think of the idea of maybe adding some white shading to the mouth, give it more depth or something? and offiously in the process diming out the black a bit?
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maybe u should brighten up the person and dull down the blackness of the mouth, if u give it more depth then u still draw more attention to it, so maybe do something with the mouth..maybe like an insect or something to ur likeing in the mouth that can draw the eye to the face then to the rest of the stuff...it depends if u want the mouth the focus point, if not then dim it down a bit and bring more to the face, brighten it or make more define lines...lots of ways to do it
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I think it looks tight grrl. Make for a cool blacklight poster.
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actually we were contemplating that with my other on Stress Provoked Angst, if we ever get around to it.... but this one is going to a friend of mine, hence the little bit of extra work I did on it... can't be selling shit now can I?
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