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DevilsSpawn — The Habitual Shopper
Published: 2006-06-30 07:07:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 435; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 9
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Description
Materialistic creatureswe wander this earth,
seeking satisfaction
in a world made just for us.
Style of the sesaon.
Got money to spend.
A sea of people,
all pursuing the same new trend.
A field of sheep,
lost in a reality
they'll never understand.
Genuine originality,
something they'll never buy.
Comments: 9
You had well chosen rhymes implemented in this, I found it enlightening. The wanderings, indeed. Nice.
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Thank you, I appreciate the comment. ~Rach~
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i like this, it seems to flow very easily and has a very natural feel about it, the comparision of humans to sheep, indifferent but then the same. good work
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i really liked that rach, and i kow vhat you mean, people annoy the shit out of me, if only vecould cull them....... *grins*
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You may think that it aint that good but i reckon that you have hit your subject right on the head, you have covered the habitual shoppers mind so well and the effect that media and society has upon them. It is great to see a mind that can sit back form all the corporate views of the world and comment on what they see with such conviction as displayed in this piece. defenitly worthy of 4 and a half thumbs up
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you know.... there is an easier way to sum up what you just said; I have the ability to see the shit amongst the so-called 'good', plain and simple... But I also would like to repeat the fact I really should not go out too often... People just piss me off.
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yes they piss anyone who cna see the good in bad off...just some of us can live with the feeling
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