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Published: 2013-06-21 02:08:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 378; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description In Your Arms

We were close enough to touch
But far enough to walk away
Everything I owned was on the floor
And everything I was was on display
For you
Your hand reached out
And I regret to say I flinched
But I stood my ground
And felt your fingers on my skin
Yeah they were rough around the edges
But soft upon my heart
As brick by brick the wall I’d built
They slowly picked apart
And soon

I felt free from insecurity
From the doubt and from the fear
From the burden of the broken heart
I’d carried all these years
I felt free of the prison
That I’d always thought was home
I felt free
In your arms

Yeah you were just a breath away
An exhalation on my lips
And I was falling from the brink
Of that almost kiss
With you
But you spread your wings
And we flew into the sun
You set my soul on fire
Stole the breath right from my lungs
As I screamed in ecstasy
When you twined your hand in mine
Then I dove headfirst into your eyes
And left the world behind
And soon

I felt free from reality
From my body and my soul
From the coffin of my sanity
And all the years it stole
I felt free of the prison
I’d always thought was home
I felt free
In your arms

I felt your heartbeat on my cheek
Steady breaths beneath my head
A living pillow under me
A body for a bed
Oh you
Yeah you slumbered like a lion
While I laid there wide awake
Tranquility within my heart
A smile on my face
And I knew it then
As I know it now
That that night would be the first
Of countless others to be found
Soon

Yeah I felt free from the past
From the shackles and their scars
From the concrete cell within my breast
And its cold steel bars
I felt free of the prison
I’d always thought was home
I felt free
In your arms
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Comments: 12

Less2TheTruth [2013-07-05 16:40:26 +0000 UTC]

A pull on the heartstrings for sure. You can feel the emotion in this. Bravo

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DevonEaton In reply to Less2TheTruth [2013-07-05 22:24:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I like to emotionally inveat myself in my writing. If it makes me sad or happy to write it then I probably did something right.

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DualPsychic [2013-07-05 06:05:39 +0000 UTC]

it's interesting to say the least

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DevonEaton In reply to DualPsychic [2013-07-05 06:12:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. It's a rather slow song and I usually prefer something a little faster paced, but it' nice to tread new waters sometimes.

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UndeadMiRaClEs [2013-07-05 06:04:14 +0000 UTC]

This poem makes me feel like crying. I can relate to this on many levels. This is great thank you for writing this.

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DevonEaton In reply to UndeadMiRaClEs [2013-07-05 06:06:22 +0000 UTC]

Well I didn't mean to make anyone cry, but I'm glad it reached you in some way.

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UndeadMiRaClEs In reply to DevonEaton [2013-07-05 06:08:21 +0000 UTC]

It's fine

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TabbyxthexCat [2013-06-21 16:22:41 +0000 UTC]

This was really great ^^ I like that the choruses (or whatever) change.

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DevonEaton In reply to TabbyxthexCat [2013-06-21 23:13:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I find too much repetition in songs to be annoying so I try to change things up where I can.

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Dustin-Eaton [2013-06-21 07:22:21 +0000 UTC]

I definitely like this one. The metaphors are well written and the changing chorus is always a good lyrical choice.

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IamDreamfire [2013-06-21 04:05:55 +0000 UTC]

Incredible

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DevonEaton In reply to IamDreamfire [2013-06-21 05:36:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a million :3

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