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devotedwritter93 — Broken Opposites
Published: 2012-01-24 16:46:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 498; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 3
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Description broken hearts and broken minds
the link of broken souls
I close my eyes to broken love
and eyes as sad as yours

the tear streaked sky of fallen rain
and dusty desert floor
the opposites of intricates
now bear the broken stone
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The-Bulldog-Scribes [2012-02-18 01:46:17 +0000 UTC]

There is some nice imagery going on here, although I have to admit, the intentional lack of capitalization always sort of bothered me in a way. I never saw it as adding anything to a piece. I know it's stylistic but I have trouble understanding it.

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xXVegasGirlXx [2012-01-26 20:53:35 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome<3

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devotedwritter93 In reply to xXVegasGirlXx [2012-01-27 16:04:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! ^_^

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