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Devvyn — MoCaW's Classic Pinup
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Published: 2009-02-06 03:22:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 2026; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 38
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Original line art by *MoCaW : [link]
Please visit the original and leave your love for the original artist if you like the lines.
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Original character appearance credited to *JessicaElwood .
Please visit her page for more of the same type of art.
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I coloured the line art and added the lazy background. I don't feel this is my best work so critique on the colouring and background is preferred.
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Comments: 10
I think that background, while simple, is good. It draws attention to the character, and doesn't look overly busy. Which is what you want, really.
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Ha ha, laziest background ever! It's one of the PhotoShop preset gradients. 
Thanks for the comment.
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"critique on the colouring and background is welcome."....
The highlights are good on the skin. Would have been nice to see highlights in the hair. (Maybe I just cant see them?) You need more/darker low lights. (Unless you where trying to emphasize a bright light, so if you can see a shadow you should be able to see better low lights.) I like how well the shadows are done, the way the exclusion of light curves around the radius of her tail. Very well done devvyn. ^_^
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Thanks for the detailed comment. I can definitely agree about the hair. There are highlighted strands in there but it's not consistent with the style used on the rest. And you made a very good point about the shadows. I hadn't thought of needing the shadows to match intensity but they really should. I guess it helps that you spend time rendering 3D models because you get to experiment with lighting in a more obvious way. Thanks!
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Glad you like it! Thanks for the comment.
I was curious if you'd be willing to offer critique? I was experimenting quite a bit and I'd love any input you might have to offer.
(Go nuts, I can take it. I think about feedback the same way you do.)
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Thanks!
Do you have any suggestions or critique? Anything you'd do differently? (I was experimenting a bit with this one.)
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