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Published: 2004-05-04 00:10:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 85; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Beneath the cold depths of my room,I sit and dwell in my shattered pride.
Naked and alone, I shiver coldy
Your cruel words have stripped the last of my dignity
Self worth burned to ashes,
Damned away.
Enraged with hell deep within
Drown in my shawdows as I question my vulgar sins
Veins flow with fury
Not a soul to confide,
Anxiety boils inside.
It's overwhelming
What to do?
Grab a blade and press upon my limb.
Pierce my flesh with all the HATE
Slash away my tears and pain
Carve unto my body to destroy mental strain
Far beyond tears
Spill the blood of all feelings
Dripped dry all my sorrow
I feel relieved,
But now ripped internally.
Look what you've done
I am scarred forever.
Arm bears my one emotion
HATE.
This is my hate
I cry for more of this twisted cruelty
What was this need?
This selfish action?
My blade burning movements-
gave me sickening satisfaction.
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Comments: 9
Serenity- [2004-07-06 02:58:47 +0000 UTC]
Not too good with words? Ha, lie! I like this very much, it's very well written
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difficultRETARD In reply to Serenity- [2004-07-06 03:40:21 +0000 UTC]
as long as someone likes it.....
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Silent-Priest [2004-05-29 21:23:52 +0000 UTC]
yea seriously this is great compared to mine you use alot more of your vocabulary than i do mine and its well great i dont think i could write something the compares to that so keep writing
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boxcarr3421 [2004-05-04 22:25:25 +0000 UTC]
it hurts my head tryin to figure out how u can't consider urself good with words...it's better than my stuff...and all i do is write!
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difficultRETARD [2004-05-04 03:17:04 +0000 UTC]
trust me, it hurts my head for hours trying to come up with stuff like that.
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linkinmaggot [2004-05-04 02:26:20 +0000 UTC]
dude wtf.. u talkin bout ur amazign with words.. i cant ocme up with all these big words
i hate bein brown lol
later
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squantos [2004-05-04 00:42:16 +0000 UTC]
Woah. I really like this even though it's obviously really sad and emotional! You really should submit more poetry!
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difficultRETARD In reply to squantos [2004-05-04 00:58:20 +0000 UTC]
you think so? meh, maybe if words can out right then i just might.
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