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Champion-of-Whatever [2010-07-04 03:58:57 +0000 UTC]

Gonna agree with =Kurokari on the arms. I think the real issue with her left arm (our right) is that teh upper arm is too wide, and the elbow and forearm don't really connect in a convincing way. That in itself might have something to do with their shapes...? I can't really find any good tutorials or such at the moment, but this [link] seems rather nice. Mirrors are also pretty good for this sort of thing.

Solid coloring; I think on another piece with nice, straightforward lighting like this, you can start pushing colors and what you do with them. At first, I thought her mouth was a little open, but second glance tells me I was wrong. Lips gots shapes, too, even uppers. D: Their feelings will be hurt if you just make'em a line and call it a day. They will cry.

Hm hm hm, finishing this quickly before I get too picky... The tree looks a little rushed and detracts a bit from the overall image, her eyebrow is really long, (eyebrows don't tend to touch hairlines, as a general rule), and that is an intense push-up. A lot of your ladies have intense push-ups. Where do they shop(?), I totally have a lady that is in need of some intense pusher-uppery.

Pretty happy colors, though, and now I am done.

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Kurokari [2010-06-14 03:36:25 +0000 UTC]

Nice little image though her arms bother me greatly, especially her left arm. Other than that it is a very good image.

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