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DreamerYamaneko [2008-09-28 03:24:08 +0000 UTC]

OMG! mature content!

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ArdentNinja [2008-09-26 01:25:00 +0000 UTC]

Heeee, cuuuute...ah! The Critique message is on! *rubs hands*

I'm going to address styling in this as well as anatomy.

I think that although Froot's head seems to indicate she's got a very large forehead and large head in general (caused by pushing her face so far down upon her head), she is very very cute and I really love the hair and how the eyes and jawline and ears came out. I really think that placing the ears at that very natural and anatomically correct location upon her head is VERY good. I highly approve!

I don't think I need to dig into the anatomy very much for the upper body and arms. The one big thing that stands out about the upper body is her right arm (on our left) seems to be rotated at the shoulder waaaay back, as indicated by the line that shows where her arm and her ribcage overlap, and how the line pushes her ribcage forward rather than backward behind the bicep.

Hands are improving! I like these hands!! SRSLY. They are drawn 3-dimensionally with depth and the right anatomy and they look natural. The thumb on her left hand (on our right) looks a bit off, but I see it is being held into the palm by the fingers so I can rationalize it looking the way it is, so it succeeds. Keep up the great work

Now down to hips. I can see where you have been paying more attention to female anatomy and I really like how the upper section of the hips are coming along in this. The belly button is located properly. I won't discuss the mons venus because it's obvious that it is not really taken into consideration as far as displaying anatomy. In other words, you're trying to draw nudity without actually drawing nudity, and that's fine.

Now the lower section of her body is where things begin to go astray for me. I get the sense that you might have felt like you were running out of room on the paper to show all the way down to the feet so you ended up having to scrunch her legs a bit more than you would have liked. I DO like how the thighs intersect with the hips, though how the legs turn out isn't really clear because the knees aren't well defined. Actually, you do indicate where things should be, but its like you just gestured in where the knee caps would be and just worked in the calves and feet as best you could.

Here's something interesting that I do see, though. You got the proportion from heel to top of head right. It's correct. Sure, the thighs are long and the calves short and the knees too low..but you got the overall proportion right on the money. You also made her petite without making her look like a walking stick, which I also like. She's somewhere around 5.5 heads tall, which makes her short, but she's a realistic short, which is great.

I'm so proud of the improvements you've made! KEEP IT UP!

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