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Published: 2003-12-31 05:33:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 2304; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 401
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103 new cuts tonightI took a picture- just for you.
They tell some stories
So sit and lisen
I'll read them- just for you.
#86..my favorite
Nice, deep and true.
This one tells me all is lost
Never to run back to you.
#23, just a small one now
I see no life in your future
Sunless, empty but still crampt.
of course
those pesky
Endless days of torture.
#46 was the worst
runs from thigh to thigh
Tells us of the everlasting moments
That make us want to die.
#8- a unique one thats for certain
Shaped like a heart,
I think you would know what it was for
I carved it with but a dart.
Here we are at 54
To get to the last tale
This was for my mother
For loving me, to fail.
Shaped like a tear drop,
54 was the most sad.
The emotion pulled together
Compiled to form that beauty
Tears me apart
I cant even look at it
sometimes.
On my thighs just here to sing
My new scars will forever be
Not just in phsyical but pyshcological form
This beauty I've bestowed upon me
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Comments: 75
awesome, i dont think that it is all that sad as such, it is true and real, or at least feels that way, and it is amazing to remeber why each one is there, it is a reminder to urself of what happened and the things that you felt, its great, and someday somehow in some shape of form, it will be me. i ove it, will check out ur other stuff now....
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you are welcome.
rachel
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holy $&^@! great poem dont think ive seen any better
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amazing... i love this poem.. i can relate so well. so beautifully written.. wow, definately a
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oh my, thank you very much
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beautiful!! brilliant... it takes a lot for poetry to really hit me and yours definitely does. wonderful, i cant wait to see more from you...
rock on my pretty....
Leslie
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I really enjoyed this concept, and the way you went through it.
nice images, hard, but real. well done
(thanks to ~papermoose to tell me to come here!!!
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I was directed to this poem via ~papermoose. I'm glad I got to read such beautiful writing. Don't let those negative people bring you down. It's one thing to give creative criticism, but the negative comments you got weren't even worth reading. Keep writing! Keep writing!!!
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wow, thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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No problem. I think you have real talent. Besides, these writings are from inside you, and it is a privelege for us that you choose to share. Remember that, when some jerk off decides to mouth off.
PS. I'll be watching...I just added you to my DevWatch.
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ahh thank you very very much- i think i shall go check your gallary out- i havent had a chance yet, too many comments from everyone to reply too
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I love your poetry.....it is so great!!! You have much talent! "#54" sounds exactly like one of mine....but that's another story...you are so talented! Keep writing!
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why thank you very very very much
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That was amazing. It was deep, it grabbed my emotions, and I loved reading every letter
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why thank you very much
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Self mutilation.. always beautiful. i've never understood how girls can cut their inner-thighs--that's gotta hurt.
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well, i'm guessing the person who commented above me didn't even read the poem, didn't realize it's not a suicide poem, but what can you do? this poem is excellent, i love that i can picture each scar you write about, that each has it's number, it's place.
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thank you! ahh that person, gar. obviously need to learn how to read and interpret poetry- thanks for your comment, after reading the one above i was feeling a tad annoyed, and now im not
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actually, i think i can read an interpret just fine. the problem is your writing, it's horrible.
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No, lengleng is right, this poem is shit. It's the same as the 91276674 shit poems on the the same subject that came before it.
Feel annoyed.
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if you have seen one, you have seen them all.
what makes this better than any other suicide poem?
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uuh, its not a suicide poem. did you actually read it??....
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"Here we are at 54
To get to the last tale
This was for my mother
For leaving me, to fail."
Excellent, overall. Wonderful imagery with the shapes. The only flaw I see in it is that "future" and "torture" don't rhyme, at least not with my accent.
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hehehe with mine they do
just barely,
thanks for the coment!!!
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ouch thattakes you from deep inside and makes u wanna split your heart. the feelings so touchable u can almost feel the blade.
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wow, that comment was amazing, thank you!
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I dunno what was so amazing about it but I am glad !
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WOW! I love the technique, from what I've seen, original, plus it rhymes. Do you need a hug? because this poem led me to believe you do... so here
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deifnately a favorite 
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OoooooOoo thank you
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THat is fucking awsome as hell. Its ironic because i recently took a picture of my stomache sliced the hell up with my scalpel, it wasnt as bad as it sounds. pretty harsh though, anyways i took a picture with , written accross my chest, one is never enough" if you want i can im it to you sometime
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