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Published: 2005-06-24 12:29:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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A heart full of Love
Encased in an Empty Shell
A Shadow of what i used to be
Writhing in my Personal Hell

The Million pieces of my Heart
Through an Eyelet of a Needle
They Tear me Apart

Trying to Catch a Glimpse
Of Who I Once was Before
You Engulfed my Heart

I Had So Much to Give
Once More Time I Wanted
To Trust my Heart
When only my Head Knew Better

The Distance Between Us
Like a Dagger In My Heart
Driving Us Further Apaprt

Here in Body
You are but without a Soul
Rest In Peace
For True Love Has Been Shown On My Part.


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Comments: 14

Walking-On-A-Cloud [2005-07-25 04:36:15 +0000 UTC]

Hey I just saw you off someone's site.

This is pretty nice, I like how even though your stanzas don't line up you can still make it flow.

I hope you keep writing.

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DistortedJaz In reply to Walking-On-A-Cloud [2005-07-26 12:33:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for that, yeah at the time it was just flowing out, i was really hurt. What site did you see me on ?

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Walking-On-A-Cloud In reply to DistortedJaz [2005-07-26 21:06:51 +0000 UTC]

Um... ~splutterfish had a link to your site in one of her entries.

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DistortedJaz In reply to Walking-On-A-Cloud [2005-07-27 14:17:58 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful Gal

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DistortedJaz In reply to Walking-On-A-Cloud [2005-07-27 14:11:01 +0000 UTC]

aww man she rocks hehehe

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Walking-On-A-Cloud In reply to DistortedJaz [2005-07-27 19:51:32 +0000 UTC]

How do you know her?

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sat609 [2005-07-03 15:13:33 +0000 UTC]

I like.. good job.. Hope all is well...

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MiSsAnTiChRiSt [2005-06-28 11:26:04 +0000 UTC]

OMG i love it... well done babe

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DistortedJaz In reply to MiSsAnTiChRiSt [2005-06-28 23:39:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Sweetie

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MiSsAnTiChRiSt In reply to DistortedJaz [2005-06-29 05:28:18 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome GUESS WHAT I GOT ME L'S hehehe go me

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DistortedJaz In reply to MiSsAnTiChRiSt [2005-06-29 11:27:58 +0000 UTC]

Go The L's, You can drive me around now !!! hehehe

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MiSsAnTiChRiSt In reply to DistortedJaz [2005-06-30 06:29:10 +0000 UTC]

lol for sure ... hehe i'll drive there n pick ya up lol *winks* haha

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splutterfish [2005-06-28 01:42:08 +0000 UTC]

i like the story that goes along with it.. nice

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Quest2694 [2005-06-24 13:03:15 +0000 UTC]

Good strong piece and strong imagery. Very well done you really should write more.

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