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Published: 2003-05-10 09:17:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 292; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 32
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Description I doubt that many can really make out the writing on that thing, it was a doodle I did in class out of boredom. I hand-wrote it out again properly on the next page, which you can read here . But even then, I've mixed up the order. So here it is again, properly. And yes, it does make no real sense.

Largest Wing Reads:
this is the remarkable show of oddities in a collection of senseless!!! prose and fable in truth

Going anti-clockwise:
- it will blossom into unwitting glory curved into a legend. leg. end. that this p - age will fail to tell.
- picking roses and flowers and counting seconds to their death for there is more beauty in potpourri, yes.
- WE ARE MORE THAN THIS - we fail to follow through
- the power of echo is so strong and misjudged as cheap imitation

The Claw:
- black slashes black gashes rip
- peeling away history with a
- remarkable tear and drag of these
- ugly colourless claws bringing colour forth
- so we can only yell HELP

The Window speaks:
why why do people peek through me and steal an unwanted glimpse of innocence how can I stop them from looking in from leering in private joy? I shall place curtains.

Circle reads:
- silent songs of the winds, here they be
- they be silent songs of the winds here
- songs of the winds, here they be, silent

The Traffic Light:

Main - I am the gatekeeper the keyholder I make people stop to curse me while they wait in line in order I stop armies and make you appreciate the radio but sometimes a man in blue interrupts me and I turn invisible!!

Pole - I keep the message standing and alive I pillar the future and am part of the past before determining others in front I stand tall before collapsing into ruins - riot! - ohno.

Red Light - only place for comfort in colour - stop halt cease pause NOT YOUR TURN.

Yellow Light - Why is it when people know they should stop they DON'T

Green Light - I am the key the light you have been waiting for PASS ME

On The Winding Road:
how do we know how far we will go and how winding will the roads be how magnificient the reward that awaits me

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Thank you for bearing with me. Thank you.
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Comments: 5

ccoww [2003-07-15 13:46:20 +0000 UTC]

hey liyana, very nice picture....ooohhh...dooodleplex.....

check out the pic i drew...

cheerz.....^_________^

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skape7 [2003-05-23 07:17:51 +0000 UTC]

Ooooo, I love it! Especially those traffic lights.

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aprigel [2003-05-13 15:05:56 +0000 UTC]

I wholeheartedly agree with shatteredone... it's random but it all makes sense... Awesome.

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shatteredone [2003-05-10 20:50:56 +0000 UTC]

i like how random every one of these things is! but so intricate at the same time. awesome.

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princepoo [2003-05-10 10:35:03 +0000 UTC]

ack! i wish i could read all of it, but i can read most and from what i've read...

its awesome!

you've got a little typography style in ur poetry as well, veryvery cool.

hehe i can see some of the stuff on the other side of the paper

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