nihilim [2004-02-26 08:38:12 +0000 UTC]

Elipses in poetry aren't something I like,
as the pause can be just as well indicated
through less... phonetically awkward means.

The abundance of pronouns was distracting
and a bit dissociating. I find myself asking,
"he?" "they?" "you?" and who they are. You
don't give answers, which leaves this leaving
me wanting more, but not in the good way.

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