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Published: 2015-09-07 00:00:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 2392; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description Opening Scene - outside Obsidian, Night

Lizzy stands outside the building in her little black dress, ready for a night at the club. She looks between the card in her hand and the large glowing letters of Club Obsidian overhead, and looks around at the milling downtown crowd.

Lizzy: Hmm...This is definitely the place. So where's Brielle? She said she'd meet me outside. I wonder if--

Brielle: Lizzy!

Lizzy: Brie!

*Quick friend-embrace*

Brielle: Do a spin for me quick. Come on, show me what you've got!

Lizzy: How do I look?

Brielle: Like you're ready to show em' your moves!

Lizzy: Thanks! A model always has to look her best! Umm...what about you? Did you forget to change?

Brielle: I work here, remember? I'm gonna change into my uniform inside. Come on, let's go~.

Scene 2: Club Obsidian - Lobby

Brie flashes a card as they walk past security and enter through the double-doors into a sleek and classy lobby, complete with black tile flooring. There are doors the left and right walls, and the back wall has an elevator and stairs going down.

In the corner/against the wall is a counter and check-in set-up. The woman behind the counter is dressed like a hostess, with a headset. Some people are standing in the lobby chatting and laughing.

Brielle: Do you still have that card I gave you?

Lizzy: Hm? Oh! Yeah, I've got it right here.

Brielle: Perfect~. That card is good for two free drinks and will get you into the show room and the play room. It's kind of like a park pass, so don't lose it okay?

Lizzy: I understand "free drinks" but what are those rooms you're talking about? What, do they have an arcade?

Brielle: Hahaha! Lizzy, you really are perfect!

Lizzy: ? Did I say something funny?

Brielle: Anyway, don't worry about it. I'll make *sure* to show you later. Listen, I have to get changed. Go on ahead and I'll meet you downstairs.

Lizzy: Sure thing. And thanks again for inviting me Brie. I've been looking to cut loose lately~.

Brielle: Girl. You have no idea~.
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doomedfool [2016-02-09 16:53:37 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thanks for the message! It's super appreciated. As helix's days got packed up and this comic kind of fell through, I may go ahead and convert the script I wrote into a story at some point. Thanks a lot for showing the interest. It really helps a lot. 

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shadow012567 [2016-02-09 16:40:31 +0000 UTC]

Wanna read it

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