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doorsofperception — Inner Abashment
Published: 2006-07-14 06:44:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 59; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description You are
the
opposite
of
Liberation.

It is
breaking
me
down.

I do not
know
what to do
or where to go.

I feel
the same feelings,
yet not
the same feelings.

It hurts
me
to hurt
you.
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Comments: 6

brokenfaerietales [2006-07-15 01:55:36 +0000 UTC]

It could be longer.....I'm not a big fan of short poems because they don't seem to draw you in as much. It's pretty good though.

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doorsofperception In reply to brokenfaerietales [2006-07-15 02:48:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I was just putting down some thoughts. Thank you, though.

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brokenfaerietales In reply to doorsofperception [2006-07-15 03:17:24 +0000 UTC]

I understand. You're welcome.

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Seseeke [2006-07-14 06:50:12 +0000 UTC]

Could you hit the nail on the head any more directly?

Wonderful words dear.

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doorsofperception In reply to Seseeke [2006-07-14 06:52:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Seseeke In reply to doorsofperception [2006-07-14 06:54:10 +0000 UTC]

No problem at all dear, my honor

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