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Published: 2001-04-10 03:10:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 336; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 40
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Just something I'm working on for a class, still need to add a background and fix a little of the shading, but for the mostpart the foreground is done. Feedback would be appreciated.Related content
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wow, great job man, the detail in the jeans and the face is awesome. the hands and forearms are really well done to.
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Nice sketch; keep up the good work.
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i think it looks great, maybe needs a little more contrast in the lower portions similar to the sharpness of the glasses
-fry
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that's pretty cool... I agree with the head thing and the background... I don't think you need one
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great freehand, his left arm looks a little odd ebove the elbow. Some stronger tonal contrast would set it off even better. Maybe really darken the dark bits and keep working on the lighting till your outlines are less apparent (only suggestions).
Youve done really great with this challenging pose.
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Good work on the hair+ jeans, the value was done well
Something about the proportions is throwing me off though, cant figure it out. The arms or the head?
its good nonethe less
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that's pretty awesome, the head is kind of small for the body, but that adds interest
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